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Ribe_FireRain


Mental instability at its finest and aspiring punk rock musician. PS: Buy a creator a coffee to keep him awake? https://ko-fi.com/firerain

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Rainbow Dash has turned up at your doorstep during the late hours of the night in tears with a bloodied nose and a bruised cheek. When she tells you what happened to her, the response horrifies you and you decided to take it upon yourself to seek the answers from the one who did this to her.

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Rated Teen for themes and some violence.

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Comments ( 17 )

Well that was a fun read always enjoyable to see a asshole get a nice helping of karma

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*an asshole* sorry and agreed

Dom would be a much better significant other to Rainbow Dash, though it seems like their relationship is more of a platonic one.

Ahhhhhhh.. some good ole classic beating the shit out of shit. Bravo, i loved the read.

I love reading stories such as these, as it gives a bit of vent to my pent up anger.

I would have gave him a swift kick in the balls after I took my foot of his chest

*gets huge justice boner*

Ah hell yeah, that was satisfying to read! >:3 TAKE THAT, LIME QUARTZ!

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What balls? Those evaporated to dust a long time ago. :moustache:

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Too right mate. Anyone who treats their girl/mare like that doesn't deserve to be called a man/stallion.

Honestly if it was me, I would have brass knuckled him in the face multiple times and shot him in the back legs. Just saying

It be very tempting to go full out on kicking his sorry flank for what he did to Rainbow Dash.

Ok, since the guy’s named Dom, I literally pictured him as Dominic Toretto (aka Vin Diesel) from the Fast and Furious franchise.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Weird, right? But I can see Dom doing all of those things (including beating the fluff and bones and blood out of Lime until he was nothing but ashes) to protect his best friend.

His “family”, if you will. :raritywink::raritywink::raritywink:

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Vin Diesel, what a guy. :yay: Way better actor than Wayne Johnson. I prefer him miles better. He's way more loyal and charismatic. :raritywink:

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The ol' fashioned Mafia style ass-kicking, eh? Robert De Niro would be proud! 💛:moustache:

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I honestly really like them both.:pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

But you gotta admit, the comparisons between Toretto from Fast and Furious and your story’s Dom are strikingly similar if you think about it. :raritywink::raritywink:

this just a heartbreaking, sad, and awesome story.

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