The Dazzlings, broken and powerless, have been reduced to mortal beings. Now, without their jewels, their future is uncertain.
When Sunset asks the three of them about their past and how they got where they are, they do the only thing they could do:
Tell her everything...
This was worth the read. Great job buddy. Bravissimo!
Awesome story
Almost gives me a different opinion about Queen Novo.
Shadowmane, big brother...... You've had some interesting stories that you have brought out...... but this is the first among your work that has really pulled me in so deep, I couldn't take my eyes off it for one moment. Please tell me you plan to continue this or at least make a sequel story to it.
Very interesting story, it makes Starswirl and his friends them villians for just seeing them evil just because their singing cause ponies to argue and not learning about them except their actions. Shows that heroes of harmony judge others by their actions, not their true reasons.
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People like Starswirl disgust me.
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...Should you not judge a bad action as bad even if it had a good result? just saying.
I was quite hoping while reading this that the Dazzlings, and maybe Sunset, would make a trip back to Equestria.
nice work.