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The Galactic Empire has suffered it's largest defeat yet with the destruction of the Death Star. Not only did this weaken the Empire but it has helped the rebellion as more systems have pledged their loyalty to the Rebel Alliance.
To save the Empire, Emperor Palpatine has dispatched his apprentice; Darth Vader on a mission to bring new planets into the Empire for more income and workers. However when a miscommunication occurs onboard the Executor it ends up with a Navigator accidentally typing in the wrong coordinates, leading the fleet to Equestria.
Unfortunately for the ponies of Equestria Darth Vader is growing impatient and has therefore ordered an invasion of Equestria.
The ponies are not strong enough and do not have the technology to fight the Empire and when the Empire occupies Equestria, the ponies have no choice but to fight back. But will the ponies fail or will the ponies win with the help of the Rebel Alliance if word of the planet's existence comes out to the public of the Galaxy? Find out in this Crossover Fanfic.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 34 )

A story about my favorite Sith Lord? I'M SOLD!

I love this!!! MLP and Star Wars crossover are the best!

Equestria better lose hard. VERY hard.

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I may have just slid over the description of the story, but I have to agree. They are so many fics where for some explainable reason or for the sake of plot armor, the ponies somehow manage to pull out a Deu Ex Machina out of their asses and win the bloody day.

They better lose and get lightsaber shafted, especially when Darth Vader is in the picture. Every bodies favored Sith lord...who is more beloved and respected then any pony could...on the INTERNET.

Well, that invasion went fast! Of course Equestria was going to lose from the start. Why? Lack of technology and was caught by surprise by the Empire. And I also saw that coming.

lack of technology? The Empire lost to Ewoks

I might also be releasing a second story at the same time!

Interesting.

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Everything the Empire has, Equestria doesn't. It's going to lose.

For thosse who didn't understand the Author's note at the end of Chapter 4 "Operations" this is what I meant:

I decided to change the picture of the fanfiction because I never intended on Darth Vader becoming the main character of this fanfiction. He only was there as a plot device you could say. Originally Darth Vader was only going to be in the first two chapters and that's it, but due to running out of ideas I put him in the third chapter "Skirmish" as well, none the less I think that the new picture represents the this piece of fiction much better than the Vader one.

Oh and while I'm here I might as well say that work on Chapter 5 is almost done and the Chapter will be released this weekend or next week.

I think you underestimate ponies

A sequel? Hmm. Sure, I would love a sequel. I want to see what happens next.

I've posted a blog post where you can vote on whether there should be a prequel or sequel. Go vote if you're interested in a continuation.

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Ponies: "we've got magic and friendship!"
Galactic Empire: "we can exterminate your entire planet and not even care!"

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not without a Death Star they can't. And even assuming Celestia can't weaponize the sun in anyway, there's a shit load of potential magic attacks, they have shield spells, Luna could attack them in their dreams, dragons are also on the planet, Pegasi could create massively destructive storms for them to have to deal with.

Ponies are more powerful than Ewoks and we know the success Ewoks had

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Ever heard of Base Delta Zero, mate? 1-2 star destroyers can wipe out all life on Equus within a day or two. Poison gas can do the same in less time. Ewoks were only successful on the GROUND. What if the ponies put up a fight more than the empire expected and they just gas the planet? Empire wins no matter what.

"weaponize the sun": she will destroy the planet
"shield spells": star wars shields are MUCH stronger and even they don't last that long to turbolasers
"attack them in their dreams": stims
"dragons": GAS
"Pegasi": Weather manipulation technology

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shield spells would be useful for combat with troops.

Star Destroyers are in space. The Sun is in space. She doesn't need to go near the planet's surface to use it on the Empire's ships

Do other Star Wars characters appear aside from Darth Vader and Emperor Palpatine?

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If you count original characters created for this fanfiction then yes. But if not then the answer is still yes, though I must warn you that their appearance will likely only be in one chapter.

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Star Destroyers are in space. The Sun is in space. She doesn't need to go near the planet's surface to use it on the Empire's ships

Star Destroyers orbit close enough to the planet to be visible from there. Moving the sun close enough to them is enough to kill all life on Equus.

shield spells

an E-web will make short work of a shield spell

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I wasn't suggesting she move it either.

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trigger a solar flare and coronal mass ejection

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so, disable their communication for a few minutes?

Twilight was keen that she had a solution to this, she had studied physics enough to figure out a way to possibly destroy the walkers. Her idea was that a strong rope should be able to halt the walker's advance and when it tries to go forward it will trip over and end up destroyed or at least disabled.

KHow would twilight have enough time to study them. And how did she know what they looked like

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Simply put, Twilight Sparkle is one of the most intelligent characters in the MLP: FiM universe, I would say Starswirl was smarter but he's long gone.
When taking into account that she has been able to successfully manage every situation in which she was unprepared it only makes sense for her to find a possible way to defeat an AT-AT walker. Of course, they are multiple ways other than using a rope such as bombarding it with Ion Torpedos to temporarily disable the walker which will allow small arms fire to damage it. In the end, Equestria does not have the BTL Y-Wing Starfighter to do so or the T-47 Airspeeder which makes Twilight Sparkle's rope idea the best option in my opinion. I may be wrong and there may be a better option but this was the best one I could think off to have Equestria at least try to defend themselves.

This story seemed rushed if you ask me.

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Yes, I wrote this as my first ever published story on fimfiction and therefore I wanted to upload regularly to keep the readers entertained. I have learned my lesson now and will usually spend a week at least before releasing a new chapter, sometimes maybe a month.

Lord Vader was standing on the bridge of his flagship, The Executor. The ship class was the largest in the Empire, it was an Executor-Class Star Dreadnought being 19,000 meters long, the ship represented the Empire well and the men onboard were not the ordinary crew members of the usual Imperial II-class Star Destroyer but these were highly skilled, picked from the best Admirals like Grand Admiral Thrawn and Admiral Piett. Same thing was for the Stormtrooper Corps onboard, the ship held the remains of the 501st Legion, the only Jango Fett clones still serving the Empire. But the ship also had the elite Shadow Troopers and even deadly the Imperial Royal Guard.

From this alone, I pity Equestria.

Those species were the Yuuzhan-Vong, but Thrawn had no idea about that. Only them and some Chiss knew about them. In truth the Yuuzhan-Vong had prepared to attack the galaxy for more than 20 years, it was a question when and not if it was gonna come.

Ah, so you are using the Legends continuity! Now that I know that, I can know how this universe works!

so in the end everyone died

i have the sudden urge to remake this

Well at least we know there is still good in Anakin's heart and it will lead up to him betraying the Emperor to save Luke out of love for his son as he couldn't bear to watch his own son suffer.

I have a feeling Luke is gonna be in the battle of Eques along with R2-D2.

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