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Shadowmane PX-41


Just your average british lad. Oh, and don’t mind the alicorn OC. Keybladers are much more OP than alicorns...

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Lemon Zest. Fun-loving headbanger, proud CPA student, and now elf queen? Something is clearly wrong here...

The art belongs solely to Pixelkitties, if one couldn’t tell.

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"So... is nobody going to bring up the fact that I was nearly shot with bows and arrows?" She asked thin air.

That ending line...:rainbowlaugh: God, this was hilarious! Great work!

Random as hell. How fun? Just the light read I was feeling like.

What does Alkar ana Her Majestime mean in English?

"So... is nobody going to bring up the fact that I was nearly shot with bows and arrows?"

Nope!:trollestia::raritywink:

I'm pretty sure you meant to put that author's note above the main story. Right now, it's below it. Just a heads up.

In any case, this was certainly entertaining. I do like a good Shadowbolt story, especially one with Lemon Zest doing Lemon Zest things. I felt your Sugarcoat was a bit too demonstrative, but that may just be a matter of opinion. Personally, I can't see her shouting for anything less than the end of the world. Still, overall, this was a surprising amount of fun.

Oh, and one last thought:

She felt the back of her ears and how rigid and sharpened they had become "—Oh my gosh, Lemon! I have pointy elf ears!"

"Also, they've gone numb. Is that normal?"
"Yup."
"... how many different colors of elf ears do you have on you, anyway?"
"Under this breastplate, it's like forty percent plastic by volume. I am the Sherwin-Williams of elvish accessories."

MJP

now i REALLY want to write a story where Lemon Zest (or someone else) is an actual elf

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