Sometimes hesitation is the worst enemy of all. You wait a little too long or say "there's always tomorrow" and that's enough.
Until it isn't.
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Rose Quill
Author of the Homecoming series, occasional contributor to Bodyguard!AU, and food aficionado.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BUT ALSO YES BUT MOSTLY NO
This was a very nice story, friend o: I LIKE HOW LIKE you didn't actually point out who it was, but my heart knew it would be Twi, it's probably why I clicked on BECAUSE MY HEART LOVES PAIN. The writing was fluent and easy to read, and it felt very much like Rarara. The only thing that threw me off a bit was Fluttershy not saying hello to Rarity, but I couldn't tell if it was because she didn't see her or she was too distracted, so it's not actually a big thing or anything.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Edit: I kinda want to add this to the appropriate shipping group, but it might spoil the surprise element? Hm...
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AHHHH! Senpai!
If you wish to add it to the proper group, feel free! I'm sure a few will try to ignore the implicit hint.
This was so sweet and heartbreaking all at once. I loved it! Agreed with the other commenter though, that it was a little strange that Fluttershy didn’t take notice of Rarity, but that was super minor because overall it was a great short story that really tugged at my heartstrings. Great job!
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The flip side of this story is up...
Poor Rarity.
Awww gee. Poor Rares.
She's so sweet about it though.
Not that you'll actually do this, but you've made one where Rarity confesses and one where she's missed her chance. Is a sort of sequel where Twilight and Fluttershy find out about Rarity's feelings and the three form a herd out of the question?
I'm just curious, is all. Because Raritwi, Twishy and Rarishy are all favorite pairings of mine.
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Give not creativity a length of rope for which it shall hang itself.
Unexpected is due out Saturday.
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Ah, I see. I can't wait to see what you've got for us next!
I like this introspection of Rarity, and it's great seeing this kind of depth from her. I thought at first this might be a more 'who does she like' open-ended fic, but wasn't surprised to see Twilight (it's a cute ship, after all)
I did think the Fluttershy thing was a little odd, more so because they're so openly a couple in front of Rarity when it sounded like they were trying to keep it quiet. I mean, most couples don't kiss and make sweet talk every time they leave (especially in front of others) even though it's a cliche in so, so many stories, so it's not that glaring.
Still- very cute, and I love Rarity's reaction which is very true to her spirit of Generosity
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Well, to be fair, my relationships tend to do a lot of that, so personal experience bleeding over is a thing apparently. Maybe I just keep getting overly sentimental partners, but it also tended to happen a lot with my aunts and uncles as well as my parents. *shrugs*
Sorry for the late response, work issues.