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StatiZkyZ


AKA Le Durgen, a novice horse writer

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Sunburst has been described as the pony that knows everything about magic, yet he is untalented in casting spells. But when a certain tragedy befell upon somepony he knows, can he successfully cast the most important spell in his life by himself?



A little emotional fic I wrote to improve myself at writing. Do point out my mistakes constructively if I made any.

Cover art source: https://starbat.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Two-Sides-of-Sunburst-648790168

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Comments ( 6 )

Woah. That was deep. :pinkiesad2: ~ Mintstar

This felt pretty real. At first, I thought Sunburst just committed suicide, but I'm happy he actually tried to heal Starlight. :pinkiehappy: Also, this made me cry :fluttercry: ~ Mintstar

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Funny that you mentioned that, cause the idea of Sunburst actually trying to cure Starlight is kind of a last minute change.

Originally, I kinda made Sunburst commit a double suicide with Starlight right away, but I decided to change that to make the story more tragic.

Glad you find this fic enjoyable, thank you for reading :twilightsmile:

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Your Welcome! ~ Mintstar

Dang, that was sad but at least Sunburst gets to be with Starlight

Is someone...cutting onions? 😭

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