Pinkie Pie represents the element of laughter, but she isn't always so cheerful. She experiences depression, especially as a filly. Even now, she goes through unpredictable periods of extreme sadness. Or she would, at least, if it weren't for a certain mare. No pony besides Maud knows how often Pinkie Pie would fail to harness her element if it weren't for her. She provides Pinkie Pie with occasional doses of happiness disguised in the form of homemade cupcakes. The only downside is where she gets her main ingredient.
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Chapters (2)
The buck? Also it's Applejack. Very detailed just not for me.
Damn. Dark. Was written decently too, while short. And, please add a [Gore] tag
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Okay, I know that these kind of stories aren't everyone's fav.
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Thanks, glad you liked it. Adding the tag now!
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I know, it just kind of came out in the second person. I'm happy that you think the story is good!
It's good, just change the past tense verbs to present tense. Some words got mixed up with others, like what instead of want, so might want to proofread that.
Thanks, I'll work on that when I can.
So Maud did all that just to help Pinkie Pie and she chose Applejack of all ponies. I get that she's helping out her sister but this is taking things too far she just killed both Applejack and Applebloom just to help Pinkie Pie. If Pinkie Pie ever catches wind of this, i don't know she might disown Maud for this and want nothing to do with her. This is Pinkie Pie she might not do that but i would. There could've been plenty of options available for her to try but she chose this way to help her it's just not right and i don't think Pinkie would approve.
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I know, that's why she has to keep it a secret!
Also, this is a 'Cupcakes' spin off. Why did Pinkie Pie even include Rainbow Dash on her list of possibilities? I tried my best to include reasons for torture, unlike Pinkie.
Still, I do understand what you're saying, but it was hard to mend every plot hole.
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At least i know your reasoning behind the making of this fic now
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What do you mean?
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What i mean is that you made this fic as your spin of the fic Cupcakes
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Yes, that is correct!
I would not mind getting hold of Maud's cupcakes.
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Yeah, Happiness Cupcakes sound great . . . unless you look at the Ingredients . . .
WTF! I SWEAR THIS IS JUST STRAIGHT UP WRONG! WHYYYYYY!?