• Member Since 29th Sep, 2016
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Silver Butcher

I'm easy to love and hard to understand. I'm not a very Decisive person, I have a Patreon I need money to throw at problems. I need to watch season 8



The Main 6 live their Immortal lives, doing all they can to make their Dragon friends last few years as happy as they can.

Alternate (and longer version) of Good Bye old Friend

This story has a Sequal - Reincarnation

the goal of this story was to make you cry in less than 600 words, tell me if I succeeded.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 80 )

Wow Spike is really really old.

You know..... this is really touching and I'm kinda curious to see how the others go...... ALSO WHAT HAPPENED TO STARLIGHT!?

hope ya have a wonderful day.

Sar Meister

Dear god...my feels are drowning...

It might be explained in a latter chapter, or maybe not, who knows.


*Warning* story may attack you in the feels.

That's alright with me, I hope you have a wonderful day

Sar Meister

This is a good book, but I can say I can help you with some of your grammar.

and the ending gonna make that heart break worse

Twilight better hurry her magical ass up

What happened to Starlight is Explained in the Final chapter.

Twilight's magical ass got an entire story about her being with Spike whiled he died, I think she can share the final chapter

I hope the ending puts you at ease.

A little bit good work dude right in the fells.

You know when you think you've seen enough depressing stories that you can't cry..... Yeah thats a load of bull :fluttercry:

May you rest in peace Spike, I hope you have fun with your family.....

I hope ya'll have a wonderful day

Sar Meister

He's up their with them taking a nice nap with his wife and child

Fine I except that but we both can agree that twilights needs to move her magical ass

The story was good and it actually made me a little teary eyed near the end, but I felt like it could've been better. The stillborn filly for example just seemed like something added for the sake of making it sadder which didn't feel natural and took me out of the experience.

you got me...I was stuck for an ending, and the Stalight thing was planned, but I just couldn't think of any good way to bring it up, and forgot about it until almost the end.

This was the first time in years that a story got me damn you just damn you:ajsleepy:

I cried so much while writing this, I don't think I can ever bring myself to write another sad story, even tho I seem to be good at it.


My Lord damn that story hit so hard to your heart it's all most make you wish spike has the inmortal with them but this story great

Don't do that, everytime you hunt one ninja, 9 more star chopping onion's to throw you off his trial

Don't re-read it! It never gets easier to read. I wrote it and it still make's me cry

have the Ninja's taken over?
also if it make's you feel better I did plan to have another chapter with Spike and Starlight in the heavenly plain with the stillborn baby, but I just couldn't make it sound right so it was cut

or would that make you feel worse? either way I hope you enjoyed my heartbreaking story and have a pleasant night


You say you are best with comedy these last three stories proved yourself wrong

I'm not crying I just have something in my eyes

Still not crying I just still have something in my eyes

There are Onion Ninjas stalking anyone who reads this story.

I couldn't read through the tears. Thank you for the story.

It needs some more work, but a good attempt. I like the concept, but it's very flat. You don't explain the impact towards the end of the story. It started strong, but each chapter weakened the impact as it felt more and more rushed.

Anyway, have a like.

Right to the personal feels in less that two paragraphs. Loved ones with.... memory ..... problems.......................... it hurts, a lot, no matter how much time has passed.

Began crying when Spike recognizes Fluttershy. I know what that meant to her.

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