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Gets me hot and bothered to see a rural country farmer speak so formally.
That's a pretty sizable error, and that's in the first sentence of this story...I'm pretty sure Granny Smith is a mare--sure she can be quite a dick to everypony, but she's still a mare...
>>DanvilleBengal
That was an accident; I fixed it. Thank you for pointing this out to me so I could take action to correct it.
>>ImMrNoobHeadFU1
Thank you. I was going to actually have them do it or at least have one of the fantasizing about the other, but it felt too soon for me and I didn't want to rush it.
Thank you for commenting.
She's not one of those girls who uses him for labor?
>>OmniFox
No, I would never write Sugar Belle like that.
8493624
You're welcome
I'm pretty sure that there were a few other errors I'm sure that you or other eagle-eye readers can catch, but I had to comment on the most blatant one, particularly when we know how his family goes now--Grand Pear is his mother's father, and Granny Smith is his dad's mother...
EDIT: You can actually link to the comments that you are replying from--all you have to do is hit the 'reply' icon in each comment if you want to directly reply to a comment. The reply icon is the first of the three icons and it looks like this: >>
Not bad
Might want to make it past tense... but all in all not bad.
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8494624
Good.
Can you imagine what would happened if Sugar Belle decides to move to Ponyville?
When the next chapter coming in?
8651445
I don't know yet. I've been focusing on getting stories out there that I think people would be interested in that this one kind of slipped away from me. I can't give you an exact date since I don't want to give one then break it due to various circumstances.
So it’s been canceled?
8651500
No. I know I'm not going to do that. And I know I'm not going to put in on hiatus; I don't want to do that just yet.
So it’s going to be a while then?
8651507
Yes