When Phantom Syndicate, a group of three young ponies, receives a letter from Princess Luna about a ghost problem, they will have to fight harder than ever before to keep their lives, and their souls, from being torn to shreds.
Heavily influenced by Lockwood & Co. by Jonathon Stroud
«you were as good as dead» im no expert but i think it should be there
a very interesting fic ^-^
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I think they both work but it might have been better. Glad you liked it though!
This has been an interesting beginning and I hope to continue reading soon. You have created really intriguing characters and the settings seem just right I was a little puzzled by you referring to a stallion as “it”, but I presume any ghost is seen as “it”, right?
Not sure why you place enter gaps? But the story is a bit interesting so far.