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BluePhoenyx


I'm back with a new name and a new passion for writing! A phoenix will always rise from the ashes

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When Phantom Syndicate, a group of three young ponies, receives a letter from Princess Luna about a ghost problem, they will have to fight harder than ever before to keep their lives, and their souls, from being torn to shreds.

Heavily influenced by Lockwood & Co. by Jonathon Stroud

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 5 )
Comment posted by PonyVoice deleted Oct 19th, 2017

To Mirage and her team, they were real corporeal things that if you were touched by, you were good as dead.

«you were as good as dead» im no expert but i think it should be there :twilightblush:
a very interesting fic ^-^

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I think they both work but it might have been better. Glad you liked it though!

This has been an interesting beginning and I hope to continue reading soon. You have created really intriguing characters and the settings seem just right :twilightsmile: I was a little puzzled by you referring to a stallion as “it”, but I presume any ghost is seen as “it”, right?

Not sure why you place enter gaps? But the story is a bit interesting so far.

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