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After gaining his newfound staff powers, The Storm King gives Tempest one last task before promising to restore her horn...killing the four former rulers, beginning with Twilight.

Takes place directly following after the staff empowerment scene.

Spoilers for MLP Movie! Duuuh!! LOL

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It's an interesting idea, but needs to be fleshed out more. Even with having seen the movie, there is so little emotion and detail put into the story, that it lacks having the intended impact.

Dainn #2 · Last Friday · · ·

"I have altered the deal Tempest. Shall I alter it further?.."

This is a really interesting story, I was all most crying and I don't normally cry at stuff like this.

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Lol, that is EXACTLY what I had in mind when I wrote that

aww... tem-er-fizz... u did good, u did good.

now im sad

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