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i can tell very fast that i will be favorting this story in the near future
This story reminds me of a book I used to read with me mum.
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Glad you're enjoying it.
Huh, Homesless Twilight, never seen that one before.
Overall I'd say a heartwarming introduction, tugging at the sympathy strings and all that. Just out of curiosity, how long do you plan on this story being? I can see this developing in interesting ways I'd like to follow.
Also Nice username / statement.
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I have a few things planned that should make this a good length probably 10,000+ words at least.
Also I couldn't believe that no one had taken that username before me.
Hmm good idea tho i feel some dark moments should still be there but more in the past tense
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Found the Artist.
It's Little Orphan Twily!
I have to say, this story looks like it DOES have potential. It's pretty rare to see a "homeless Twilight" story (I'm guessing her parents and older brother died when she was too young to remember them, because I VERY seriously doubt they would abandon her otherwise), as a couple of other reviewers already pointed out.
I'm also guessing that Celestia managed to successfully get through to Sunset Shimmer in this universe so she is still Celestia's personal student and possible bearer of the Element of Magic (basically so that Twi can be on the streets without dooming Equestria).
And, as other reviewers have ALSO said, I have no problem with the story being MOSTLY light-hearted, but there could still be flashbacks depicting some of Twilight's darker periods (nothing overly gruesome, of course; just enough to give extra background detail).
Anyway, very good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll certainly be looking forward to more of this, but will also be very willing to be patient as I know full well that real world concerns have to come first.
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Thank you for finding it.
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For the AU I'm moving away from the show timeline, Celestia will have some appearances but I don't think Luna and Cadence will even be in this world nor the element bears at least not as they are in the show. I may consider the flashbacks but I don't have anything else dark planned but depending on how things go I may add some in later. Thank you it's not easy trying to capture Fancypants's essence and all this high society stuff I'm researching isn't easy either.
Very nicely written. I like this AU's potential for story.
So it finally begins.
look like good start, I do wonder if flur will be in it, or rarity
but I do hope for more chapters and see how thing unfold
This is a pretty cool idea and i wanna see where it goes. The main thing I wanna know is how Fleur De Lis is gunna react to Twilight staying, depending if you make her Fancy's wife or not.
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I'm not sure if Fleur will make an appearance or not.
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Do what you feel is best for your story, was just a thought is all
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I can see flear being either fancy's wife or daughter or sister who take a shine to twilight
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Fancypants isn't married. Besides he's not the type to anything adulterous and this will be TwilightxFancypants.
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now there a ship I have not seen before
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Yeah I liked the idea of doing an odd ship that's never been done before.
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i dont mind it at all,
i have feeling going to like it. as much as i like blueblood x twilgiht ship, they so few out there....
A little bit on the short side. The chapter could do with a little more padding. That aside, it was quite good.
And I sense some of the 'high society' ponies aren't going to be kind to our adorkable mare.
(You know, this fic kind of reminds me of the movie, 'Pretty Woman')
Twilight isn't panhandling. Panhandling is when you fake being homeless to get free stuff.
cue rarity stage right
For some reason this brought the imagery of The Beauty and The Beast to mind. This chapter was full of fun little details, though it did feel really fast. Perhaps some additional scenes showing her being tutored would have given me a better feel of her going through the learning process, give a sense of development, rather than it being told by exposition.
It would also be a good opportunity to show how her relation with Fancy is developing ( Since I'm guessing this is a Fancy/Twilight shipping fic by the tags ), maybe a few scenes where she excitedly shares what she's been learning. Her mannerism could be endearing to him, and she could express gratitude for the continual opportunities she's had.
What dialogue you had between them was good! My only disappointment was that I was left wanting more. Lol, if that's one of your goals then well done.
All the same, I look forward to seeing how you handle the garden party.
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Don't you worry there's still plenty of story left for the romance and drama to develop.
Hey there. I have to say, this is another great chapter. I simply love the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-ups in all the right places. I particularly liked Twi's reaction to the study, the tutor's reaction to Twi, the little bits of added info on her background and the exchange(s) concerning the other nobles.
And, yeah, I have a feeling Twi calling the other nobles "anal" might be one of the most POLITE ways to put it. In fact, I have a feeling the word that best describes the majority of the society mares would probably be most appropriate for a kennel.
But I digress.
At any rate, I'll very certainly be looking forward to more, but will also respect the fact that real world concerns have to come first.
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Actually it was Silver that said that.
im glad that fancy pants is almost universally a god guy
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Okay. Thanks very much for the correction.
OH LOOK at that i fucking called it
edit: also dawwwwww
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I already had that part written up when I saw your comment and thought, can this guy see the future.
i like where this is going oh i wonder what twilights mark will be in this universe
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what did you call?
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oh i called it last chapter that rarity would be the dressmaker
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well to be fair can you name another dress maker that is around canterlot?
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I'm sure there are just not any of note.
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my point but you could of used coco pamel or her former boss (who name i can not remember)
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I suppose that's true.
Great job on this latest chapter. The characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly loved Twilight's interactions with this universe's Rarity (subtle hints of friendship even in THIS universe) and the efforts to learn enough about society to at least get by in time for the party.
I'll very certainly be looking forward to more of this, but will also be very willing to respect the fact that real world concerns have to come first.
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Suri Polomare you mean?
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yea her
I don't think I have ever seen a Twilight x Fancypants ship before. This feels like one.
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And it feels good to be the first to do it.
It is one.
D'AWWW tho this does make me wonder where is fler during this
Pretty please?
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I think its mostly because most stores have fancy pants be much older then twilight
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True, but it's still good to put out some a little more original.
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Oh yeah not saying any thing is wrong just giveing a idea why its not more common
Interesting concept, definitely will finish reading it.
But you seriously need to edit this, halfway through the first chapter and there are already many mistakes...
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Like what?