Teaching The Unteachable

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Pinkie Pie was bored. Usually she had Pinkie Promises to fulfill, parties to plan. But not today. Now fate would decide who she would spend her time annoying.

B.T.W. Feel free to post mean comments or dislike the story, I know some of you will think it sucks. It was just fun to write.

I'll try my best to respond back to any comments posted.

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MarcusPyKnight

MarcusPyKnight #1 · Oct 10th, 2017 · · ·

This was short and pointless.
Not a terrible start, but as a one shot, its not worth reading.

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #2 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

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I'm not gonna deny it.

I could make this better, I guess, but obviously I don't really care at thing point.

Apple Jack approves of your honesty.

Dragonwarrior10

Dragonwarrior10 #3 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

Ummm...okay. It’s remotely funny, but there are some edits like capitalization errors....

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #4 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

Thanks, that's a win for me considering what I predict most comments will say.

Please point the mistakes out.

Dragonwarrior10

Dragonwarrior10 #5 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

"Why did you call us both here again, Twilight?" Rainbow Dash, Apple Jack, and Twilight were all seated around a large Crystal table inside Twilight's Castle. "Did the map call us?" Rainbow Dash looked down for about the fifth time at her cutie mark, which was, disappointingly, not glowing. "Ugh, I wanted to go on another adventure! You know what would be awesome right now? Being called to the Badlands. Or mabye-"

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Dragonwarrior10 #6 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

"Come on now, sugar cube," Apple Jack interrupted. "Twilight's tryin' to tell us somthin'," Rainbow Slumped down into her Crystal chair with a huff, making occasional glances at her flank. Apple Jack just rolled her eyes at this. "Please continue, Twi. What's goin' on?"

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Dragonwarrior10 #7 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

Twilight glanced a a clock overhead. "Oh, It's almost time! Rainbow," Rainbow Dash looked up. "I'll need your speed to pin Pinkie Pie. Apple Jack, once she's got her pinned, go over to Pinkie and Make sure she stays that way." Both of Twilight's friends just stared at her, quizzically. Twilight looked at the time once again. "I'll explain later, just trust me. She'll be arriving in three, two, o-"

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Dragonwarrior10 #8 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

"What do I do? What do I dooooo!" Pinkie Pie started bouncing frantically around the room. She knocked into pictures, vases. You name it, she broke it. Rainbow flew towards her. In a matter of seconds, Pinkie Pie was tackled to the ground. Apple Jack fallowed close behind, Pinkie still trashing about.

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Dragonwarrior10 #9 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

Twilight pulled out a piece over paper. "Don't worry, I made you a schedu-"

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Dragonwarrior10 #10 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

Pinkie Pie entered Your Inner Instrument , with the jiggle of a bell overhead to announce her presents. Pinkie bounced over to a chair in the waiting room and took seat. The cushion felt good on her hindquarters after rocking back and forth nervously last night. She didn't know what she would've had Twilight not been there for her. But after a few minutes, Pinkie Pie realized this wasn't much better than her current situation. Worse, if anything.

Dragonwarrior10

Dragonwarrior10 #11 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

The walls around her were a dull gray, with a just a pinch of purple accents. There wasn't much to do, either. Unlike most of the places she went, like the dentist for example, their were no coloring books or toys. Just a small coffee machine in the corner. To make matters worse, it was decaf. DECAF! What kind of place only offers decaf? Noticing a small box for suggestions, she wrote up an angry note about the drinks provided, then went back to doing nothing. After what seemed like hours, the door to the music room finally opened.

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Dragonwarrior10 #12 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

"That's me! But I prefer Pinkie." Stepping inside, she sighed. This room wasn't much different than the waiting room. The pony inside matched. She recognized her as vinyl scratch's friend, and she always tried to act friendly around her, but they weren't very close. She'd made her smile a couple times, but she usually stayed pretty serious.

Dragonwarrior10

Dragonwarrior10 #13 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

"Well, I play the cello. An even larger one is the Double Bass."

Write Pillar

Write Pillar #14 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

Short, but sweet. I really feel sorry for Tavi here.

Inferno demon Dash

Inferno demon Dash #15 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

Short and quite a few errors but honestly I liked it, very in character, great job. Personally I like the head canon of Octavia being Pinkie's cousin but that's just me. Have a like.

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #16 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

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Dragonwarrior10:

Wow, thx for all those corrections!

I really appreciate you taking the time to help me.

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WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #18 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

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Inferno demon dash:

Yay! A like! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

P.S. I like that cannon too.

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #19 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

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Write Pillar:

I'm glad you liked it!

BUT YOU WILL NEVER KNOW OCTAVIA'S PAIN.

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Inferno demon Dash

Inferno demon Dash #21 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

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I did and awesome, that would make for an awesome story.

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #22 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

Hmmm, gonna think about some interesting story options along that line for you. stay tuned, i'll comment on my home page if I think of any, and you can tell me what you think.

Dragonwarrior10