Well, this is deeply disturbing on multiple levels. However, I would like to commend you on a story that you obviously put a lot of work and thought on. There's quite a few run-on sentences, also a lot of unnecessary commas, but those aren't big issues. All in all, a well-put together story. Please seek help.
Seriously, the President and the Princesses having sex? I was really disturbed by the concept of this story. Don't all of you commentators agree on that?
Well, while your story is not bad. Its just weird for the readers to read this story. So I would basically say, well I don't know what to say.
concept was disturbingly interestin.........but.......being who tah president is makes me.......Meh.......in lol level this is a win....just take this gif as general reactions
though that story was just woah, I have to agree if Barack and Celestia had one DAY one 24 hour day not to be president or a princess of a kingdom to be treated as any other citizen they would party like there is no tomorrow.
A good read. Interesting and funny concept that was well written, save for a few misspelled words here and there, but that's nitpicking.I laughed my ass off during the whole thing, and that deserves a like (also all the wtf it's causing is a bonus).
Now that I've actually read it, it's clear you put quite a bit of effort into it. It's well written and interesting. And totally, completely cracked. 4/5.
My brain would not physically allow me to read past the first two paragraphs, but against my better judgement I forced my brain to comprehend it anyway. I have read almost every kind of clopfiction from romantic encounters to gore, but nothing has disturbed me as much as this piece of work. I wanted to read some nice pony love before I went to bed but no. I will be having Obama based nightmares for weeks. This is coming from the girl who giggled while reading "Cupcakes." Congratulations sir, you have created a whole new kind of horror.
This is totally awesome. You didn't go for cheap laughes - you played it totally straight with exploration of the characters' psyches and everything, and let the inherent absurdity of the idea supply all the humour needed.
Now we need more of this. Some sort of analogue from the Equestrian side for Obama worrying about the Secret Service - Celestia's staff wondering what's up and snooping, I dunno. This idea is too batshit, and its current execution too good, to not take it further.
You. Are. Insane.
The good or bad kind of insane, I'm not going to say.
Well, this is deeply disturbing on multiple levels.
However, I would like to commend you on a story that you obviously put a lot of work and thought on. There's quite a few run-on sentences, also a lot of unnecessary commas, but those aren't big issues. All in all, a well-put together story. Please seek help.
Wat?
Do us all a favor and seek professional help. Please.
I find the concept morbidly fascinating... But a little too morbid and not fascinating enough to actually read it.
Uh...WHAT IN THE FUCK WAS I JUST READING?
Seriously, the President and the Princesses having sex? I was really disturbed by the concept of this story. Don't all of you commentators agree on that?
Well, while your story is not bad. Its just weird for the readers to read this story. So I would basically say, well I don't know what to say.
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concept was disturbingly interestin.........but.......being who tah president is makes me.......Meh.......in lol level this is a win....just take this gif as general reactions
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though that story was just woah, I have to agree if Barack and Celestia had one DAY one 24 hour day not to be president or a princess of a kingdom to be treated as any other citizen they would party like there is no tomorrow.
The description is enough to put a huge WTF?!! expression in my face.
No need to read the story.
A good read. Interesting and funny concept that was well written, save for a few misspelled words here and there, but that's nitpicking.I laughed my ass off during the whole thing, and that deserves a like (also all the wtf it's causing is a bonus).
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You find me one spelling mistake and I'll give you a dollar.
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Now that I've actually read it, it's clear you put quite a bit of effort into it. It's well written and interesting. And totally, completely cracked. 4/5.
I thought it was a fascinating exploration of a leader's psyche
jeez even tho im interested in where this lead to in long run, the wtf reactions are making my day,,,
My brain would not physically allow me to read past the first two paragraphs, but against my better judgement I forced my brain to comprehend it anyway. I have read almost every kind of clopfiction from romantic encounters to gore, but nothing has disturbed me as much as this piece of work. I wanted to read some nice pony love before I went to bed but no. I will be having Obama based nightmares for weeks. This is coming from the girl who giggled while reading "Cupcakes." Congratulations sir, you have created a whole new kind of horror.
This is totally awesome. You didn't go for cheap laughes - you played it totally straight with exploration of the characters' psyches and everything, and let the inherent absurdity of the idea supply all the humour needed.
Now we need more of this. Some sort of analogue from the Equestrian side for Obama worrying about the Secret Service - Celestia's staff wondering what's up and snooping, I dunno. This idea is too batshit, and its current execution too good, to not take it further.
Totally mailing a link to whitehouse.gov
i am going to fav this pure lolz
.... what?
I'm faving this because it is so deliciously insane
uh... wait... I can't... uh...
Me reading:
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Post-read:
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This is messed up.
That's really all I have to say.
This is brilliant!