Rainbow Dash really messed up. She promised Scootaloo one epic stunt show for her birthday, but can't exactly do it herself while limping and covered in bandages. Good thing Fluttershy is available. Too bad Fluttershy has no idea what she's doing.
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I enjoyed this.
Sequel where Fluttershy gets what she wanted when?
You wouldnt believe how many times I got interrupted trying to read this. But it was worth it, that was adorable!
Pretty sure it's actually buckball Fluttershy would have a trophy for, and even then all she does is use her tail.
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Every team member got a medal from the Equestrian Games, including Bulk Biceps, and yes, she would have one from Buckball too.
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8500452 I know, I'm just saying that you mention hoofball and not buckball, which we've seen Fluttershy actually play.
I bucking loved this story. So very in character and funny as hell. Amazing story, really great job.
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Wow. I did not even notice that typo. Thanks for pointing it out. It says 'buckball' now.
the tags say comedy but I did not laugh.I chuckled a fair amount at the end, and the starlight bit, but on the whole it was not funny.
However.
Scootaloo. Fluttershy. Rainbow Dash. Any two of them in combination has the potential for a good story, all three even more so. And this is no exception.
I'm impressed with this because of how much it made me feel feelings, as uneloquent as that might be. I'm even more impressed because it remained largely in character for every pony, and never made Scootaloo an orphan. Seriously, I think this might be the only sad-drama type I've read/heard of that uses these characters but does not use that plot point. So congratulations. You've made something really special here.
Is there a sequel about Dash's birthday?