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Lastofakind


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Trixie takes a new friend to a café that serves those with a unique appetite. A short one shot to get back into writing MLP fics

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Comments ( 8 )

I'm with ya Octavia. Meat is delicious!

"Besides... Your the first pony Trixie has ever taken here."

That's supposed to be "You're". Two paragraphs in and we get something this amateur. I'm sorry to say I'm out.

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Thank you for pointing that out. Its been a long time since I wrote anything and anyone I once had to proof read is gone or moved on from Mlp. I wish you would give my fic a second chance but I understand if you don't.

So was Rarity doing something taboo when she cooked eggs with Sweetie Belle? In Sisterhooves Social, If I remember right.... also her father fishes.....like why.... I mean how would someone fish, if they never intended to eat it. It wouldn't become sport if there wasn't a reason for the fish in the first place. .....I guess I'm saying that Rarity eats fish.....

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Maybe I do need a second chapter to explore the subject more...

Comment posted by Crossbredorc deleted Oct 22nd, 2017

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I'd say give it a try. The story is already good. This story doesn't really make meat eating into a fetish so that is actually a great start. A few stories make it into some sort of fetish. It just seems to try and push it too much. Honestly ponies eating meat isn't too hard to believe. I mean in lore, Unicorns are Omnivorous, so I could see some ponies trying out meat and liking it. Plus ponies that have been around Griffins a lot might have tried meat before. It is a fairly uncommon thing to write about, but it has a some potential.

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maybe you should.

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