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Ugly-Duckling123


I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)

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The Pony of Shadows is back and one of the first things he does is use his dark magic to take over one of the ponies who freed him from his 1000 year long imprisonment.

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Interesting I'll follow along

These are only my suggestions and you dont have to even notice me:twilightsmile:

"Neither do I Luna, but we need to try. To keep our ponies safe." Celestia agreed hoping Twilight and her friends, were alright.

"Neither do I Luna, but we need to try to keep our ponied safe." Celestia agreed, hoping Twilight and her friends were alright

Back at Ponhendge, after getting a medium length story from Pinkie Pie - about who everyone is, and how they found Starswirl's book, and about the map which sent them to collect the items, and what everyone had to do to get said items, and why they did this, the Ponies of Lore turned to Twilight.

Back at Ponehenge, after getting a medium length story from Pinkie Pie about who everyone is, how they found Starswirl's book, about the map that had sent them to collect the items, ehat everyone did to get said items, and why they did this, the Ponies of Lore turned to Twilight

8481441
Thanks for the suggestions

(by the way you made a typo in your first sentence)

8481720
Oh XD I see it now

Sooo... uh.. is there not more of this?

8661720
No. Sorry.

Unless you want to carry it on

(Just give me credit)

8663570
Maeby, if I'll think up a good plot. This has lots of potential in it

8664798
Ok

I did intend to continue it but i get distracted easily and lose momentum on writing if i leave it too long which is why i changed it to incomplete to complete

8665339
Yeah, that is completely understandable

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