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Jackelope


Have a nice morning, afternoon, and evening everyday for the rest of your days.


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tommal #1 · 1 week ago · · ·

Well... This was definitely not what I expected... I mean, I don't really know what I expected, and a bunch of this stuff I didn't really get, but I just... Wow...

clouds, the You’re familiar

I think you might be missing the rest of a sentence there.

If only I were, Spitfire, or if only I was, Daring Doo.

Don't need the commas after each 'was'.

Is this a first person or second pov?

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The allusion that her depression manifested as an almost seperate personality, then you see the two join when it becomes first person.

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