Flash Sentry is having a very bad day. His band has quit on him, he gets roped into helping with things that take way longer than he can afford, the people he helps tend to kick him in the knee, he keeps running into people he'd rather not see for the rest of his life, and his mother is a pain in his ass. Oh, and his food keeps getting ruined.
With all of these problems and more raining down on him, it is understandable that he would get a bit ticked off. Thankfully, there is some good news. No matter how bad a day may get, eventually, it ends, and tomorrow will be a brand new day. Who knows? It could actually end up being the best day ever.
Rating will change with the second chapter.
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It's sad this fic doesn't have more views. Your version of Flash is both likable and credible: self-honest, sometimes too nice for his own good but who can become assertive when it counts.
Also you should add a Dazzling tag.
Wow, bad day so far. It is a shame when nice guys like Flash suffer, especially that moment when he tried to help Button Mash, never liked the “No Good Deed Goes Unpunished “ trope.
Flash’s ancestor sounds badass just like he is. Though he’s probably on Adagio’s list of payback victims just like The Rainbooms now.
I can’t wait for the rest of this!
Unless there's some timey-wimeyness going on, very unfortunate implications surrounding a high school age Ditzy and a school age Dinky...
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That Ditzi has to take care of her little sister until their single father/mother clocks out his/her shift ?
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Could be that, or it could just be that on Gaia Dinky is Ditzy's sister instead of her daughter---maybe.
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Or that. I'm not really familiar with this AU.
I really like this as expands more on Flash even his being a nice guy. Not gonna lie i love the dazzlings and im a little wary since i like them seeing redeemed(but that's just me).
You know your synopsis kinda mislead me(that was my fault by the way) to belive that something would happend to Flash........... something like this:
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I like seeing them redeemed as well. Only time will tell. The good news is that things will be very different in my official "Harmony and Valor" series.
Hm! A Flash Sentry story of him having a bad day?
I'm listening...
I like the idea of exploring the character of Flash Sentry. I will follow this to see where it's going.
This is quite a bad day. I feel its going to get worse too but you made it interesting so far.
Damn, this version of Flash is a goddamn savage!
AND I LOVE IT!
Note to Self: Don't piss him off. A lad capable of taking down multiple people at once as well as the direct descendant of the knight that almost killed the Sirens is not the kind of person to be trifled with,
I love this story but... What the hell is up with the dislikes?
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Some people just don't like certain things, sometimes for good reasons, other times not so much. I try not to think about it too much and instead focus on improving my writing. Heck, I've downvoted a few stories myself, so I really can't complain too much anyways.
Hope things start going Flash's way soon...
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Some people see a Flash Sentry tag and begin downvoting. It´s like back when Blueblood was the vilest scum of Equestria for the crime of being a jerk with Rarity in the Gala.
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Are you planning to continue this story some day? I'd like to see Flash developing a love-hate (more the later than the former) relationship with Dagi.
And waiting here too...
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Sorry, I've been stuck in a rut for awhile, but I'm finally starting to pull myself out of it. Keep an eye on my blog for furthur information.
Poor Flash. All he wanted was a good day...
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I hope so. I'm kind of wondering what is up with Sunset's attitude towards Flash. Twilight did seem happy to see him.
Edit: Oh now I get it. I had mature stories hidden. I read the prequel and now I know why.