Misfits

Pinkie and Fluttershy are two Ponies who don't have very much in common. But, one day, they meet in the forest and learn a bit more about each other.

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Inspector Brown

Inspector Brown #1 · Oct 6th, 2017 · 2 · ·

Fluttershy peaked inside...

To "peak" means to reach a relatively high point, such as the top of a mountain, which is also called a "peak". I believe you meant "peeked" here, which means "to steal a glance at something". I know I'm being pedantic, but this particular mistake is one I've seen far too often across multiple online texts, and I couldn't live with myself if I didn't say anything now.

I'll finish reading the story and give you a proper review, I promise.

Deep

Deep #2 · Oct 6th, 2017 · 1 · ·

You sold me with the concept and title. Good work.

Inferno demon Dash

Inferno demon Dash #3 · Oct 7th, 2017 · · ·

Very, very impressive. I like PinkieDash. Though I was confused when you said that Dash and Shy were blood sisters, thought Dash was an only child with how her parents act?

RoyalBardofCanterlot

RoyalBardofCanterlot #4 · Oct 8th, 2017 · · ·

Blood sisters are like blood brothers. That is, they have an extremely close friendship. See https://www.fimfiction.net/user/201243/RoyalBardofCanterlot/stories?page=2 for more about that.

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