I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.
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While this is hot enough to clop to, it does feel a tad rushed. And somewhat repetitive. The worst offender being your use of 'meanwhile':.
On the creative side of things, it's pretty unique -- I enjoyed it very much! Props for writing clop about such a beautiful creature!
Is anyone gonna tell that Starlights second name is written wrong in the description?....
Also... drop the 's from Starlight's
This is nice I like it
aww, you mean we don't get to see the bloated and gravid trixie with a belly so round with ling jizz that she can't move anymore?
Really loved the story! Just wish there was even more of it~
I think there's only one word here.
Eyup.
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Yeah, I didn't notice just how much I overuse that word. That or 'however' tend to become a fixation for that story. Gonna pop in some variations or outright exclude some of them.
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Fixed that. Whoops.
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Glad you three enjoyed it!
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*boops the silly pony*
Didn't read, but I just wanted to say that the cover to this story really reminds me of this guy I used to know who wrote Alien: Resurrection porn fics.
That's all, carry on.
A neat little story. The first of its kind I actually saw here about this episode. The cock design is rather interesting. Though are ribs cockrings? Just wanted to clarify since I wasn't sure about it, though it certainly sounded like that in the story.
In any case wouldn't mind to see more Pharynx clop around. Especially in this beastly form!
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Think multiple medial-ring-like structures that curve backwards and get thicker the further down the penis they go. So basically, natural cockrings.
Think you mean "popped" there, unless the Pope was involved. Also the italics seem a little off.
off
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Fixed both, thanks.
Well, now that I've finally got around to reading this, the idea has stopped bugging me. Good story though, as always.
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That pun.
Thanks for the compliment though! Glad you liked it!
8535359 The best kind of pun. No problem.
Weak! Not week as in 7 days!
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Whoops, fixed! Thanks for pointing that out.
I would be okay with that!
Simple! Eat her out!
Pharynx: "Don't worry, you are next!"
Starlight: *gulp*
Good story! Have my upvote!
I wonder how long it went until all three are fully satisfied (and who of them gave up first/lasted the longest).
(And I feel I should mention we have an Pharynx-tag now.)
Well...that was hot
Trixie’s magic is light pink.