• Published 3rd Oct 2017
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Reunited - Lil Penpusher



The Reign of the Storm King may be over, and the friendship festival might be saved, but Tempest Shadow can't help but feel incomplete, still. There's something she needs to do. Something she will need help with.

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Home at last

The Storm King was dead, forever gone. Tempest had sworn her loyalty to him. Loyalty which he had used for his own self gain. But what about her? Had she not vowed to follow the King just so her horn would be restored? Did she not execute each and every order of the King blindly, with no regret for other ponies’ lives?

Yes. Yes, she did. Tempest couldn’t lie to herself about all this. It was obvious that she had made a mistake, the wrong choice. Did she really have a choice, though? Ever since the... incident, her friends would run away from her, too scared of her to even dare play a game together. She was alone. No games anymore. No laughing, no joy, all that was left was loneliness. A loneliness which would go on to scar her more than Ursa ever could. A loneliness which would give birth to bitterness and hate, a deep hatred for friendship itself.

And now, although it was all over, she couldn’t help but feel like something was still missing. She felt incomplete, like there was something she still needed to do. It was a thought, a feeling that kept her occupied for most of the night during the friendship festival. It was a single thought that swirled around in Tempest’s head, but one she couldn’t quite catch, one she couldn’t quite understand.

And so, she sat idle. She thought, and thought, and thought even more. She thought as hard as she could, resting her head on a pillar, away from the loud crowds of cheerful ponies. She watched the stars up in the sky, watched them calmly sit there, just like her. It was then that she heard a voice coming from the stars.

“Tempest?” they asked. “Tempest, what are you doing here?”

She briefly rubbed her eyes and eyed the sky again, quickly spotting the pony who the voice really belonged to.

“Don’t you wanna join the others?” Twilight asked, softly landing on her hooves in front of Tempest.

She returned a light, casual shrug. “Oh, I would. I really would.”

Twilight’s ears flattened as she got closer to her new friend. “But...?”

Tempest sighed as she looked up to the sky again. “But it isn’t the same without... them.”

Them?” Twilight asked back.

“Yeah. Them.” She turned her head slightly to face the purple alicorn. “Don’t you remember?”

“Remember? I-” Twilight interrupted herself as she realised what Tempest was referring to. “Wait... your friends?”

Tempest simply nodded slightly.

Twilight remained silent for a moment as the fireworks exploded up in the sky. She could see the reflection of the fireworks in Tempest’s eyes. “Do you wanna talk about it, Tempest?”

“Talk? What could a talk really change?” she replied, turning her head the other way. “I won’t ever be the same, anyway...” she mumbled to herself, barely audible for Twilight.

“Well, you don’t have to, Tempest,” the alicorn replied quietly, laying a hoof on Tempest’s shoulder.

“You might say that, Twilight... but nopony would ever accept me the way I am now.”

“Well, this pony would!” Twilight replied joyfully.

Tempest rolled her eyes. “You’re the princess of friendship, Twilight. It’s different.”

“My friendship is no different from yours or theirs, Tempest. I’m a pony like you, after all.”

“Yeah, right...” Tempest replied, letting out a deep sigh. “At least you’re not disfigured like me...”

“Disfigured? Come on now, Tempest, that’s not true.”

“Oh yeah?” she replied, light blue sparks escaping what was left of her horn. “Let’s face it, Twilight. I’ll never see my friends again. And if I do, they’ll just run away. Again.” Her voice became weaker and weaker as she went on.

Twilight watched as her friend began to quietly sob. She couldn’t help but sit down next to Tempest and pull her into a comforting hug. “You’ll see them again, Tempest. I promise you that.”

“But...”

“They won’t,” Twilight interrupted her, looking her into the eyes. “I can come with you and help you, if you’d like.”

The scarred mare remained silent for a while, letting out her tears as Twilight attempted to comfort her. It was then, as Tempest realised just how much Twilight cared, that she made her choice.

“Yeah,” she gave out between her sobbing. “Yeah, I’d like that.”

Twilight returned a warm smile to Tempest, although she didn’t notice it during her crying and sobbing. What followed was yet another moment of peace, where Tempest was free to let out all her pain and tears. Twilight felt an increasing amount of pity for the mare, struck by a horrible fate and left alone by her only friends. She would have to set this right for her. She deserved, she needed this.

“Come on,” Twilight said quietly as Tempest stopped crying, her face still wet from all the tears. “You should get some rest. I’ll be with you tomorrow morning.”

“And what about you? Shouldn’t you get some sleep, as well?” Tempest asked her friend.

“Technically, yes, but... I kinda have a gigantic party to direct here, hehe.” Tempest looked up to the sky once again as fireworks rose and exploded in hundreds of different colours, accompanied by the voice of Songbird Serenade.

“Yeah. Yeah, you’re right,” she acknowledged, turning back towards Twilight. “Thanks anyway, Twilight. I’ll never forget this.”

“Anything for a friend.”


“Come on, Twilight, we’re almost there!” Tempest shouted over to her friend who was falling quite a bit behind on their march.

“If I would have gotten a bit every time you said that,” Twilight said back to her, “I would be rich by now.”

“I’m serious this time! Look!” she said, pointing her hoof towards a small village that laid in front of them.

“Wow. That’s the village you grew up in?” Twilight asked her. “It looks... beautiful.”

Tempest felt home already, the sight of her old village alone almost bringing her to tears. “Yeah,” she replied, turning her head towards Twilight with a warm smile. “Just as I remembered.”

The two mares entered the town shortly after, both of them briefly looking around to take in the quiet, relaxing atmosphere of the village. It didn’t take long for them to meet the first inhabitants, either.

“Excuse me,” Twilight said, approaching an old, white-coated mare. “Me and my friend are looking for somepony.”

“Your friend?” the mare replied with a questioning look. Twilight turned around to see that Tempest had seemingly vanished.

“What? No! She was- ugh.” Twilight attempted to contain her anger. “Sorry, move along,” she said to the old mare, turning around with a loud grumble.

Tempest! Tempest, where are you?”” Twilight began to scream through the town.

“Shhhh!” A voice said from a nearby bush, “You’ll only attract more attention!”

Twilight briefly rolled her eyes. “Tempest, it’s gonna be fine. Nopony here is gonna hate you.”

“You don’t know that! Last time I had to run away because my only friends were too scared to even look at me!” the voice to Tempest replied from within the bush.

“It’ll be fine, you hear me? I’m here, after all. I’ll help you.”

Tempest remained silent.

“Please, trust me. Take my hoof and I’ll help you do this. Together.” Once again, Tempest remained silent for a few moments, staring at Twilight as she extended her hoof towards her.

“Right,” she said to herself before taking a deep breath and grabbing Twilight’s hoof, which gently pulled her out of the bush. “Sorry, Twilight. I... didn’t mean to embarrass you or anything.”

“You didn’t, and never could. I’m here because I’m helping a friend, and that’s what I’ll do!” Once again, smiles formed on both of their faces.

“So, ready to show me where your friends live?” Twilight asked.

“Well, I only know where they used to live during our childhood. Could very well be that they moved now...” Tempest replied quietly.

“Don’t worry, we’ll figure it out. For now we don’t really have a clue other than that, except if you want to ask somepony for-”

No!” Tempest interrupted loudly. “No, I... wouldn’t want to disturb anypony. Let’s just go and see if they still live where they used to. Come on, I’ll lead the way.”


“Right, this should be it,” Tempest said to Twilight.

The two mares advanced on an old house. Like most buildings in the village, it had a somewhat unusual form, with its roof, especially, having dents and curves. Both ponies stopped to take a closer look at the building. Memories, both good and bad, were flooding into Tempest’s mind.

“I remember this place,” she said. “I remember it too well...”

Twilight knew that it would be hard for her friend to go on now. “Are you ok?”

“Yeah.” Tempest nodded, sobbing only once. “Yeah, I’m alright.”

Tempest slowly walked towards the door of the weirdly shaped house, the same kind of house that she grew up in. The steps in front of the entrance almost felt like a mountain to her, her memories dragging her down, by the seems.

And then she stood there, in front of the door itself. It was a simple wooden door, like all the others in town. And yet this one felt so special to her, it felt unique.

Tempest lifted her hoof and slowly itched it towards the door, not daring to knock. She turned her head and glanced over towards Twilight one last time. There was no going back now, no running away. She had to do this.


Knock


Knock


Knock


Tempest stepped back from the door, breathing loudly. Her ears were trying to locate noise from within the house, but to no avail. There was nothing but silence.

“Guess they’re not here anymore, after all...” Tempest mumbled as she turned away from the door.

Yet, just at that moment, Tempest froze as she heard a sound. A sound so quiet that most ponies wouldn’t have even heard it. There was somepony in there. She turned around at once, her faith restored as she lifted her hoof a second time.

Knock

Knock

Knock

Again she stood there, silently listening for whoever might be inside the house. But there was nothing now. The sound from before was gone.

“Tempest, I don’t think that-”

Knock
Knock
Knock

She was so close, so close to her goal, to her friends. She couldn’t quit, couldn’t go back now. She was sure it was the right spot, she was certain of it.

Suddenly, Tempest’s ears flinched. Steps. There were steps. Somepony was in there, somepony was heading towards the door. And...

And suddenly the door opened.

Tempest was paralysed at what she saw at that moment. It really was him. Her old friend Bluecoat.

Twilight watched from a distance as both Tempest and the strange stallion simply looked at each other, inspecting each other. Tempest looked up and down his body; his mane, his fur, his tail, his eyes - all was like it used to be.

“Tempest?” the stallion asked quietly, equally as stunned as Tempest. “Tempest Shadow...?”

Tempest nodded in response. “I’m sorry, Bluecoat. I’m sorry I ran away and left you two.” Already, Tempest began to tear up and sob.

“No. No, don’t be sorry. It was our fault, Tempest! We shouldn’t have made fun of you, we...” Bluecoat interrupted himself, taking a deep breath. “We should have been there for you.”

“Well,” Tempest said, extending her hooves, “will you be here for me now?”

Without another word being spoken, Bluecoat threw himself into Tempest’s embrace. Tempest hadn’t been the only one who had missed her childhood friends.

“Sorry for ever running away, Tempest. Me and Emerald, we... we were just...”

“It’s in the past now, Bluecoat,” Tempest reassured him. “It’s in the past...”

“Well, what are we waiting for? You surely want to meet Emerald, too, don’t you?” Bluecoat asked, breaking the hug.

“Is she here?”

Bluecoat laughed. “Like there’s anywhere else she’d like to be.”

“Just like old times, hm?” Tempest said with a wide, genuine, warm smile.

“Just like old times,” Bluecoat returned. “Come on now, I’ll lead you to her!”

“Oh, um... wait a moment, actually.” Tempest turned her head around towards Twilight. “I still have something to do. Go ahead, I’ll be with you two in a second. Don’t tell Emerald about me though, I wanna keep it a surprise.”

Bluecoat glanced over to Twilight for a moment before giggling. “Sure thing. We’ll be upstairs.”

Tempest turned around and walked back away from the house, approaching Twilight.

“Tempest, what-”

The Alicorn was interrupted by Tempest’s sudden, tight embrace.

“Thank you, Twilight. Thank you. Thank you so much. I can’t put into words how thankful I am.”

“Don’t thank me, Tempest. You managed to do this, not me.”

“I never would have had the courage without you. Thank you, Twilight. For everything,” Tempest said again.

“I was just doing what any friend would have done, it’s nothing special,” Twilight humbly replied.

“Well, it is to me. So really, again, thank you. You helped me find the right way once, away from the Storm King, and now you have helped me find home. Thank you.”

With a last, tight hug, Tempest broke the hug and turned around. She had a whole new life to live, and things to catch up on. At long last she was back where she started, in her village with her friends.

She was home, at last.

Comments ( 59 )

Just one thing Tempests true name is Fizzlepop Berrytwist and her childhood friends wouldn't Know her as Tempest Shadow. I can barely wait for more stories about the movie :pinkiehappy:

8464674
I was actually gonna use her “full name” but it seemed a bit... silly and out of place in a setting like this.

So yeah, you’re right. Hope you enjoyed the story anyway :twilightsmile:

Wow. The movie technically isn't even out yet and there's already fics.

100/10 productivity! :pinkiehappy:

Do not read if you haven’t watched the movie or wish to avoid spoilers. Thank you.

While you're at it, you should make sure there aren't any spoilers in the synopsis, as well.

8464700
That’ll be hard, considering the entire story is a continuation of the movie. Besides, I did add the disclaimer and there’s always the story image giving away that it’s about the movie, so...eh.

Don’t misunderstand me though, I value the feedback. I just don’t know any way to rewrite it in a way that wouldn’t possibly spoiler people.

Cheers, man! :twilightsmile:

8464699
Hey, there was nsfw content of Tempest before she was even leaked. This is nothing comared to that.

Still, I hope you enjoyed the story. Leave a like maybe, if you enjoyed...? :unsuresweetie::moustache:

8464726
Cheers, man! Much obliged :twilightsmile:

8464699
Well if you have the mobile app you already know part of Tempest's back story.

8464875
Gamelofts My Little Pony: Magical Princess mobile app. It's a city builder app. Last month we got a pre-movie event focused on Shadow Tempest, it had the CMC investigating Shadow's origin. She was the final reward for completing the event.

This story was wonderful. :twilightsmile:
I haven't seen the movie yet, but from what I found out about Tempest Shadow, her backstory, and how she changed her name from Fizzlepop Berrytwist to Tempest Shadow is remarkably similar to Darth Vader in Star Wars. I also wrote 2 stories about Tempest Shadow, both are MLP/Star Wars crossovers, and you're free to check them out.

1.
cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/8ie9-1506219366-386448-full
There Is Still Good In Her

2.
cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/5igk-1506657047-386973-full
I Will Not Fail

I think you'll like these. :raritywink:

Excellent story. Although I do agree with Astorius that it might have been better if you used Tempest's real name when Blue coat answered the door.

Still, 5 out of 5 horseshoes. :twilightsmile:

So it is as predictable as I'd feared. Right down to an unintentional accident causing her to turn to the Dark Side immediately.

They just dumped TV Tropes all over the script. They made the exact same mistake as they did with Starlight Glimmer's backstory. It's completely unbelievable.

8464911 And amazingly she does indeed remind me of Anakin Skywalker... IN EVERY GRATING WAY POSSIBLE... I suppose she also hates sand. :ajbemused:

8465224
Well, it’s a kids show after all. If the writers think they gotta keep doing this kinda stuff then... nothing we can do, really.

But hey, apart from the rather generic backstory, Tempest is great! :moustache:

8465609

Well, it’s a kids show after all.

So was "Gravity Falls". So was "The Lion King". So was "The Land Before Time".

Kids shows don't have to constantly try to underachieve. We used to have some fantastic cartoons when I was a kid. We had friggin' "Batman the Animated Series" and "Gargoyles" for crying out loud!

The excuse that 'eh, it's a kids' show, it can be stupid' is the mentality that leads to the production of GARBAGE like "The Emoji Movie". It's cynical, lazy, uninspired thinking.

8465753
True, I see your point. Still, it’s what we’ll have to deal with, at least until Hasbro swaps out the show’s writers or something.

Sad, really :/

8465782 Two German reviews have been released, from sites I recall from other movies. They're usually two of the first released during most films and tend to be generous to kids films... both rate it as basically 'meh'... so it already falls into line with my prediction of between 50-60% positive.

They went total 'path of least resistance' and didn't even bother trying to draw in any new fans. Which is exactly what one of the reviewers said, that it appeals only to those who are already fans.

So, while claiming that they tried to avoid making it 'just another episode', they ended up making 'just another episode' with a bunch of new characters that don't have time to be fleshed out well. Which is what I was afraid of all along. :facehoof:

Lot of spoilers :>
8465792
In my opinion the movie was too fast paced running from one scene to the next.
I really like how they met the seaponies/hippogryphs and Klugetown was epic showing us a lot of new bipedal races(antropomorphic shark people yay) of the planet.
But we saw too little of the personality of the cast like Princess Skystar or Captain Celaeno it felt like they were trying to include as many charakters as possible without giving them enough screen time.

That Twilight tried to steal the pearl which powers only showed the abillity to transform them into aquatic forms was out of charakter for her and she didn't even say that Celestia had send them. This part felt forced and could have been better handled.

And I missed the not existing scene where Twilight apologizes to Novo who just doesn't say anything a the end.

It could have been better but I felt good when the movie ended with hope that some new things will be included in the show :) (including the action parts:pinkiecrazy:

8465989
I agree. Some scenes really did feel rushed and too short, if even a bit forced, but all in all I still really, really, really enjoyed the story.
I especially love how they used great songs to shorten the plot a bit. Yes, the scenes were shorter, but that’s fine so long as the songs are as awesome as in the movie :pinkiehappy:

8465989 Oh god... so even MORE of my predictions (which I based on 'how to make the movie as cliché as possible') are true... right down to the poorly-explained McGuffin... my god, why?

And the glut of characters DID present exactly the issue I knew it would.

This is only going to please the hard-core fans who love ANYTHING the show does, no matter how weak the writing. No one new is going to be hopping on board, and those who've lamented the decline in quality will only be more disappointed than ever to see that THIS was the best they could do...

They just don't have the creative talent needed to pull off a strong narrative.

Alondro #27 · Oct 4th, 2017 · · 11 ·

8465994 I wish the creators of this movie had kept that quote you use in mind: "Do the right thing. It will gratify some people and astonish the rest." - Mark Twain

Instead, I'm astonished that this is apparently the best they could do; something that feels like an average fanfic with poorly characterized OCs and OOC moments for the main cast.

At least if it was truly ABYSMAL ("Food Fight" level) I could enjoy gleefully shredding it to bloody bits... but it's so... bland. Generic. Lazy. Nothing feels cohesive enough, but the plot's not crazy enough to enjoy in a 'so-bad-it's-good' way either.

It ends up being like the first MLP movie all over again. Totally forgettable and dumb.

I really now conclude they should have handed this to Sony and let Michael Bay direct it and Shyamalan write the script. It would have been such a profoundly glorious disaster.

8465609
At least it wasn't afraid to kill the Storm King, like many of the old (and awesome) Disney movies have done

There were some things that could have been done better. I'd have liked the Storm King to get a villain song, or Fluttershy to get some cute moments.

But overall, better than the G1 movie of the same name.

8475119
That’s not much of an accomplishment, I’m afraid. Lol.

8475138
I guess they both did feel like regular extended villain episodes.

Is this why no one's debating the Storm King's status? Because they don't care enough about the movie?

8475215
You mean how the Storm King is one of the two villains that legit dies?

Idk. Apparently in MLP, if you’re a villain, you either get reformed/redeemed or just straight up die in a horrific way.

8475223
Three if you count Midnight Sparkle. Sci-Twi destroyed her in Legend of Everfree after she tried to take her over again

Or go to hell like Tirek (though the nature of his second imprisonment can be looked at two ways, given that he got blasted and then appeared in hell).

Chrysalis flew away though. In Season 8 she will return, and I can hope she either dies, gets permanently turned to stone, or gets banished to limbo, or otherwise reformed (though many would hate that). If she flies away again, I'm ignoring all of Season 8 forever and returning to my headcanon.

Also, some Disney villain deaths are more horrific than being magically disintegrated or turned to stone and smashed to pieces. Maleficent and Ursula got stabbed (Maleficent in bloody fashion, and Ursula was impaled), the Evil Queen got crushed by a boulder (though the fall likely killed her seconds before), Sykes crashed his car into a train, Scar got eaten by hyenas, Zira drowned, and Clayton accidentally hanged himself.

8475223
As to the other villain whose death was definite, people still debated him long before the comics resurrected him, and after Meghan pronounced him dead. And the comics are no longer even a factor because Shadow Play shows Starswirl banishing the sirens in a completely different way than the comics depicted.

MJP
MJP #35 · Oct 9th, 2017 · · 11 ·

listen to the freaking critics, the movie sucks

8475429
And here I thought I could have my own opinion about a movie.

Huh.

MJP
MJP #37 · Oct 9th, 2017 · · 12 ·

8475472
you have admitted this movie has flaws several times, stop letting your love for this franchise cloud your judgment, this movie sucks

8475480
Flaws = Bad

Simple as that. And please, just stop. I don’t want an argument, especially not about a movie. People have their own opinions. You don’t, I repeat, you do not have to share them, but it would be quite appreciated if you tolerated them.

Thanks ^-^

MJP
MJP #39 · Oct 9th, 2017 · · 14 ·

8475495
nearly all the characters were poorly-written, TWilight basically becomes a self-serving moron, none of the new characters are at all memorable, and tempest and storm kind are LITERALLY THE WORST VILLAINS EVER, also, everyone in this movie was an idiot because the plot demands it, face it, anyone who likes this movie is just mindless consuming what hasbro puts in front of them

8475512
Wow calm down. If you have nothing nice to say then go someplace else.

8465224
TV tropes is a pretty dumb reason to have something. Literally everything has hundreds of entries on that site. You'd also know that it wasn't immediate of you'd watched the film. Sure, they gloss over it during a song, but it's far from immediate. Go watch the movie before you puke all over it for the flaws it doesn't have.
8475429
Did you write this before or after you watched the film? I don't have to argue with you again, do I?

8477696 It was an accident. She didn't throw herself at the... big thing (for those who don't know and don't want it spoiled) as a filly.

Too bad she wasn't named Tempest Storm... that would've been hilarious.

Look up the name to find out why.

:raritywink:

8479058
I didn't say it wasn't an accident. I said it wasn't immediate.

8479196
Agreed. I’d like it if we could all settle down and enjoy reading stories instead. That’s why most of us are here, anyway (or, so I hope...)

Comment posted by Alondro deleted Oct 11th, 2017

Right, any new comments about this whole discussion will be deleted on sight. I’m tired of a heated debate that’s based on personal opinions.

8479196
Were you expecting a New York Times Bestseller? This is fan work, dude. Professional-level writing isn't essential here.

8492059
Oh, being professional does sound nice, though :twilightsmile:

Would it not make more sense for the ponies in her village to use her original name, not Tempest?

Loved the story btw! Just that stuck out at me.

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