MORE!!

Sweet love this chapter!👏

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Thank you !

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gutes Kapitel mein Freund (german) (^_^)

Good job ! Here your promise add like favorite your story . But are you sure keep lying everypony find out about this .

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? What do you mean

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I mean telling about planet destroy and his parents die what happens when Apple Jack find out caught Vegito lying everything but I realize she wasn't there that mean he safe .
Forget about what I said please continue your story is safe . Sorry I rushed to telling you .

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Umm okay

Good job I like it keep it up

What no power boost for sunbutt lol

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Maybe after she gets rids of daybreaker

*buzzer* pic is wrong...Movie,which is canon thanks to season 8 sneak peaks showing movie species... confirmed that Cadence is now the Alicorn of FAMILY.

Been posting that correction everywhere since it became canon...

story needs more refining, but still good though.....

Going to give you my honest opinion. I personally think you gave Vegito way to much to work with. The blacklight virus from prototype, a light saber, the force, sage mode, rinnegan, sharingan, the gourmet cells from toriko, and immortality. Again with honesty I think you should've just stuck with DBZ and DBS powers and abilities. I hope this doesn't come off as harsh or condescending and you don't take this to heart. You should also refine it a bit more a slow down the pacing just a bit.

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Nah don't worry all the other powers won't be used too often mainly focusing on DBZ,DBS and Naruto

After she calmed herself she said in a serious tone that made me scared "Don't you ever do that to me again am I clear.

"Crystal." I said immediately

Seriously? You realize your OVER A HUNDRED TRILLION TIMES Stronger than her??!! You shouldn't be "scared" of her!

I always HATE this crap when this happens to Super OP Protagonists than can easily "clap" the chosen target woman or guy.