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The mind and psyche of anypony can be surprisingly fragile, especially for one mare. With her family and friends rising to new levels of fame and fortune around her, she is finding herself left behind and all alone. Starting to believe she's nothing but a burden for such amazing ponies, maybe there's only one way to end the pain...

TRIGGER WARNING: This is not meant to be a happy or entertaining story. It deals with sensitive topics for a mature audience and touches on topics some people go through every day, no matter how irrational it may seem.

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Bell #1 · Sep 29th, 2017 · · 1 ·

This story... well... hit home for me in a pretty big way. Poor Bloom :fluttercry:

Bravo, author. :heart:

I understand that you wanted to tackle a sensible subject, but it would've been better if you made the story more detailed.For example:Why did Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle stopped talking with Apple Bloom?Why didn't AB confront them about this?Why does AB feel like a rotten apple?Did she try to find jobs and fail?
I'm sorry, but as a person with mental problems, I assure you that it's not as easy as you think.It would've been better if you tried to detail AB's turmoil and internal conflict rather than'oh my friends left me and I feel like shit..better commit not living!"

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