• Published 30th Sep 2017
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I Will Not Fail - Raptormon132



Tempest Shadow gets a visit from none other that the dark lord himself, Darth Vader.

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"I Will Not Fail"

Tempest Shadow stood alone on the balcony of the throne room of the castle of the Equestrian capital of Canterlot, looking down at the once proud, happy, and majestic royal city now shrouded in darkness and minor ruin from the recent invasion from her at the Storm Kings' orders. The Storm King's soldiers enslaved the ponies in the city below, each one bound in chains, and wore large collars with his symbol, with unicorns having magic restrictors locked on their horns, and metal rings attached to the pegasi, keeping their wings restrained. All while being guarded by the soldiers, with them also standing guard at all the ways into the ruined city, preventing anyone and anything from ever entering or leaving the captured capital.

Tempest smiled, admiring the accomplishment of capturing the Equestrian capital, before she walked inside. Walking into the throne room, she moved past the numerous stained glass windows decorated between the recently added Storm King banners around the room, looking at them with admiration. Then close to the centre, on the left of her, stood the forms of three alicorn rulers, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and Princess Cadance, all imprisoned in reflective, mirror-like stone. She glared with disgrace as her refection showed on Celestia's form alongside her.

"All this power wasted on parties," Tempest Shadow said. "But there are far greater uses."

When invading Canterlot, Tempest and her minions acquired the Staff of Sacanas, a powerful, legendary staff that channels the magic of the four alicorn rulers, giving one wielding it great unlimited power, and sent it to the Storm King. She glared at the frozen alicorn princesses, for she knew that all but one alicorn princess was among the collection, Twilight Sparkle, the princess of friendship. Her along with her five friends managed to escape during the invasion not so long ago, just after finding the legendary staff.

Tempest growled as she closed her eyes in frustration. "Without the forth ruler, the staff can't reach its full power."

"Commander Tempetht!"

Tempest was suddenly interrupted by the voice of Grubber, her bumbling hedgehog sidekick calling out, where he entered into the throne room from a side door in a fast pace. Grubber stopped and panted out of breath from behind Tempest.

"...thorry...just a thecond." Grubber took a moment to catch his breath. "Alright, I'm fine now."

"What is it, Grubber?" Tempest asked. "This had better be important."

"I know you told me not to dithturb you, but the big guy hath arrived."

Tempest turned to face Grubber. "The Storm King?"

Grubber shook his head. "No, not him." He began to talk quietly, almost to a whisper. "It'th the other big guy. The black mathked man, with the black cape."

Tempests' eyebrows rose with shock. "What?!"

"Yeah. And he should be coming through thothe doorth any thecond now."

Tempest turned her body around, and faced towards the main throne room doors. She and Grubber stood there waiting until there was a firm knock on the doors. Grubber began to step away from his commander nervously towards the side of the room.

"I...think maybe I'll let you do the talking."

Tempest gave her sidekick a sideways glance, before facing the door. She stared at her two personal Storm guards facing her with slight annoyance as she said, "Well? Open the doors!"

Tempest's guards began to open the doors at her command, making a creaking noise, revealing a shadow of a tall figure from what little light that was able to shine into the room in front of her.

The figure, mostly conceal by mist began to move towards Tempest. The sound of its footsteps along with the eerie sound of mechanical breathing echoed around the throne room, growing more audible as the figure came closer and closer. There was a cold sensation that filled the room from the figure, colder than the coldest arctic wind of the coldest winter that even made Tempest feel a small hint of fear since she became the Storm King's second in command. A tall, masked man dressed in black walked out of the mist. A long, black cape billowed behind him, completing his menacing attire. The masked man then stopped, standing before the pony commander just a few feet away.

"Commander Tempest." The masked man said with a deep, menacing, mechanical voice.

Tempest bowed her head in respect at the masked man. "Lord Vader."

Darth Vader began to pace around Tempest. "You seem unsettled."

"No, just a great amount of things to do in preparation for his Excellency's arrival, my lord."

"My apologies." Darth Vader's response to Tempest reason was sarcastic. "You do have a great many things to explain."

"The invasion of the Equestrian capital went successfully as planned. We have it under our complete control. I also had my men deliver the staff of Sacanas that I promised his Excellency. It will channel the magic of the four rulers of this land. Giving his Excellency the power of a hundred armies." Tempest began to feel a small hint of fear as Darth Vader slowly paced closer towards her. "I hope he understands its remarkable...potential."

"Its power that you have claimed is certainly something to behold," Darth Vader said. "If it were not for one of the four alicorn princesses needed to achieve this power were to have not escape."

"An oversight on our part, my lord."

"Indeed, I am sure." Darth Vader turned glancing at the frozen forms of Princesses Celestia, Luna, and Cadance, where he slowly walked over to them. "You know the Storm King has no patience for failure, Commander? He would be most displeased with hearing about this oversight by you..." He turned towards Grubber who was close by, making Grubber tremble. "And your minions."

"I understand, my lord," Tempest said. "Give me three days. I and my soldiers will recapture Princess Twilight, and her friends. I will have everything ready for his Excellency's arrival."

Darth Vader turned around, and faced Tempest. "I hope so, Commander, for your sake. Only the Storm King has the power to make us whole again." He began pacing closer towards her. "I want you, and any men you can spare to go out, and find Princess Twilight and her companions. You are free to use any methods necessary, but I want them alive. If you fail, your horn will not be the only thing that will be broken."

Tempest nodded resignedly. "Yes, my lord. I will not fail."

"I must now report back to the Storm King. After you bring Princess Twilight and companions back here, I expect you not to rest until you can assure the Storm King that nothing will compromise the staff's power in any way."

Darth Vader turned around and began to walk towards the entrance to the throne room.

Grubber came to Tempests' side while speaking to Darth Vader. "You thure you don't want to thtay a while?" He presented a slice of sponge cake. "We've got thponge cake."

Darth Vader suddenly stopped walking, and stood near the entrance of the throne room, with his back facing Tempest and Grubber. Tempest watched as her bumbling sidekick kept talking.

"No thponge cake? Oh, well. All the more for me I gue-..."

Grubber stopped talking, for he had suddenly felt himself unable to breathe due to a feeling in his throat, like an invisible set of hands were crushing his windpipe. He fell to the ground, dropping the sponge cake as it splats on the floor, all while struggling to breathe.

Tempest watched Darth Vader turn around with his arm partly raised, showing that he was Force-choking Grubber as he looks at her.

"Be careful that your minions do not choke on their gluttony, Commander."

Darth Vader releases his Force-grip on Grubber and walks away out of the throne room, leaving Tempest and Grubber alone, with Grubber gasping on the ground. And just as quickly as he arrived, Darth Vader was gone, leaving behind almost dead silence. Tempest's Storm guards then closed the throne room doors.

Grubber got up, coughing and clearing his throat. "I gueth he doethn't like thpongecake."

Tempest paced away from Grubber. "I need all four for the staff to work."

"Hey, I know! I want the Thtorm King to fix that crazy horn as badly as you do." Grubber continued to speak, unaware that Tempest was getting greatly annoyed. "It lookth like a crackly chipped tooth on the top of your head. And you know you don't look good in hatth."

Tempest snaps, and rushed threateningly at Grubber with her broken horn angrily surging with electricity sparks. "That Princess is not gonna keep me from getting my horn back! Prepare my ship!"

Grubber ran off out of the throne room, leaving Tempest by herself once again. Once Grubber was gone, she took a deep breath to calm herself.

"Please. How far could one little pony get on her own?" Tempest said to herself.

Author's Note:

This story was inspired by an image made by EJLightning007arts. And I thought it would be interesting to write a scenario from the upcoming movie.

Link to the image: https://ejlightning007arts.deviantart.com/art/Tempest-Shadow-meets-Darth-Vader-704199660

Comments ( 43 )

Awesome!!!

This would make a good start to a Fanfic version of the movie with The Empire being the true power behind The Storm King's throne.

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Probably. But the movie isn't in theaters yet, so what I wrote is all speculated by what I've read online.
As I mentioned in the note, this story was inspired by a crossover image made by someone on deviantart. And I hope I portrayed Vader faithfully in this story.

Also, I even read up Tempest Shadow's backstory, and from what I found, it is remarkably similar to Darth Vader. As I result, I previously wrote another Star Wars/MLP crossover involving Luke and Obi-Wan talking about the tragic story of Tempest Shadow. I highly recommend for you to read it if you hadn't already.
Link to "There Is Still Good In Her": https://www.fimfiction.net/story/386448/there-is-still-good-in-her

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Thank you. This was fun to write.

8457371
You did a great job!

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I also wrote another one previously. It's called "There Is Still Good In Her". Do check out that one, if you haven't already.

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I will check it out thanks.

Cool!

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Glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for adding it to your favorites. :twilightsmile:

After you see the movie, you do a sequel to this with Twilight and Vader. It was awesome!

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We'll see. But I'll be very busy with other things too. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

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Hope you will make more mlp star wars crossover

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Like I said to Saenz92, I'll be very busy with other things. But we'll see.

WOW! Loved this! If only it could become a series! Granted, I haven't seen the movie, but I know the general gist of it thanks to the wiki.

I digress though. Would love to see a sequel!

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Well, we'll see what comes about, but I'll be very busy with other stories and projects to do a sequel. :raritywink:

Glad you enjoyed it. I haven't seen the movie myself either, mainly because the movie is not going to be released in theatres in Australia until the 3rd of November, a month after everywhere else.

8475763
I see! I look forward to what projects you have in store.

And I see. That must be a bummer. No worries though! At least reading about it on the wiki will do for now right?

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Anyway, keep up the great work!

You know I can totally see a sequel with Tempest and Vader on Captain Caleno's ship, like the opening of Episode 4 with Vader interrogating Captain Antilles on the Tantive IV.

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Sounds tempting. But I'll have to see the movie first. Maybe I might, but I'm going to be busy with other stories and projects. So we'll see what comes about.

is there a AS in the story ?

Hello!

I have reviewed this story as a part of the Reviewer's Cafe.

As always, thank you for the time and effort you put into the creation of your story, and I hope you find this review to be helpful. :twilightsmile:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/308771/reviews?page=6#comment/6197052

Is it possible for you to make a part 2 for this story?

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I'm making a squeal series out of this. And I also had the artist of the story image make the images for each of them too. :raritywink:

The Rouge One references are strong with this one.

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But of course. And thank you for adding it to your favourites. :twilightsmile:

Darth Vader turned around, and faced Tempest. "I hope so, Commander, for your sake. Only the Storm King has the power to make us whole again." He began pacing closer towards her. "I want you, and any men you can spare to go out and find Princess Twilight Sparkle. You are free to use any methods necessary, but I want her alive. If you fail, your horn will not be the only thing that will be broken."

Somehow I, a hardcore Vader and Star Wars fan, find it hilarious that Darth Vader is having to say the name Twilight Sparkle and he is just silly somehow cuz of it. Imagine if there was a scene of Darth Vader watching MLP. Actually, I'll go look that up right now!

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LOL! I see what you mean. Glad you enjoyed it.

BTW I should let you know that there are sequels to this story. Yup This is the first of the series. Here's the link to the other two sequels for you to look at too.

TVader's New Empire
The story of how Darth Vader joined with the Storm King.
Raptormon132 · 6.9k words  ·  119  6 · 7.6k views
EEscape From Klugetown
Darth Vader and Tempest Shadow hunt for the Princess Twilight Sparkle and The rest of the Main Six in Klugetown.
Raptormon132 · 5.1k words  ·  123  4 · 8.1k views

I hope you like them too, and the next sequels will be out sooner or later. :raritywink:

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Ikr it's hard not to laugh when it comes to Darth Vader and magical flying ponies and unicorns at the same time.

The Dad joke is strong in this XD

9074399 We have fun here!

Would be awkward to read this one chapter stories.

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Because, I felt like those mini series could have written as a single story instead.

Vader serving the storm king is laughable, even if the storm king made an offer to restore vader's body or to somehow bring back padme he would more than likely be put into servitude at best.

But at the final battle Vader reverts to being Anakin again as the light in his heart isn’t gone just covered underneath rises up and expels the evil that controlled him all his life is destroyed and his lightsaber’s blade turns from red to blue like his old one. And fights the king as a Jedi Knight not as a Sith cause Anakin has a pretty good chance in beating that bully at his own game.

Darth Vader turned around, and faced Tempest. "I hope so, Commander, for your sake. Only the Storm King has the power to make us whole again." He began pacing closer towards her. "I want you, and any men you can spare to go out, and find Princess Twilight and her companions. You are free to use any methods necessary, but I want them alive. If you fail, your horn will not be the only thing that will be broken."

Darth Vader: "No disintegrations!"

What the hell is Darth Vader doing working for a pathetic loser like the Storm King?

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Well, he has nothing better to do, since he ended up in Equestria. Plus, he wants something from the Storm King.
What is it? Well, you'll have to read the other sequels to find out. :raritywink:

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