Sliepnir ... panting with effort

panting !?
I don't think so

"And what kind of currency do you use here?"

Forgot to tell you,
But... they don't use money in New-MoonRacer
Maybe we/you should put...
"Nice," HELsa said."Buy !?" She ask questioningly. " I suppose we will have to trade some-sort of useless commodity for the commodities that we want"

but we're going to take you to get your starter Pokèmon first," Barca said.

Kirouac: "A" He said with a smile. "Giving someone something that they need with out an immediate payment. filles like home"

wolf-like thing appeared .... A small jet of flame came out of its mouth as it did so, making Sliepnir step back in slight worry.

Why don't you have Sleipnir try ti pet Fennekin.
Have him say, "This one makes me think of Fenrir!"
Then the fire
Kirouac begrudgingly tacks Fennekin, to protect his children, since he's a dragon, and can stand fire

But Chespin didn't seem to like that. In fact, it jerked back its head in what seemed like pain.

you forgot to say that it's because of her Ice-powers

"Well, then, looks like I get Chespin," he said. "Nice."

Can you please put a joke about that he got the slowest starter
Froakie: Speed 71
Fennekin: Speed: 60
Chespin: Speed 38

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Ok, I can do that. Thanks!

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You didn't change anything !

8872492
Hello ?

9034043
Yes?

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Did you read what I ( 8872324 ) said ?

9035988
Yes. I had actually forgotten about that, so sorry about that .

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When are you going to change it ?

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Soon. Very soon.