The Fight with Gamble comes to an end , but meanwhile Ponyville gets attacked by an equal powerfull enemy, will Pipsqueak, Scootaloo and Dinky manage to overcome this new crisis two , and what will Lord Gaia and Lady Jetfire do, and what is that for a new Danger which will awaits our friends in the Dungeon of Dragon´s Mountain, and who is the sudden Warrior who appears and saves Applejack from being killed by Goba, what is his goal, why did he helped her and is he really friend or rather an enemy, what is that for a weapon he wears, and what is that for a new Danger wich begins to unfold itself in the San Palomino Desert and in Canterlot and Ponyville.
derpy hooves not whooves
928590 umm why the heck should it be stupid and no i am not trolling so wtf should that
:927991where did i wrote Whooves, ?????
yes in description
otherwise good
look at first line
933047 Changed lol, okay enjoy the further story okay
Trilogy, not Trylogy.
Sigh cant you now please stop to tell me every singel mistake and tell me how you enjoyed the story
why is there no one telling me a nice thing about my storie, like if they like it , love it or simply something they like or would have in the story, simply like that
i will format the rest lated sorry guys, next chappter is going to be an romance clopchapter
(Joke) Alt. Title: The 20 Thousand Chapters Of Derpy, Book I: There Will Never Be A Book II
1804943what will you now say with that , there will be a second book
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And it will be titled The 20 Thousand Chapters Of Derpy, Book II: Hah! I Told You There'd Be A Second Book!.
1805012 Lol, and Book three m, see there a triquel of it
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The 20 Thousand Chapters Of Derpy, Book III: I'm Only Doing This To Show That Gamer Up!
1806108true story
chapter 30 soon wil come to an end , its again an quite very long one
These are the longest chapter titles I've ever seen.
2723263 i know but it at least describes mostly what will happen in the chapter , thats why
Even the description hurts to read. Use more grammar, fix pls.