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foxgloves


why am i even here?

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For over a millennia, the Principality of Equestria has laid dormant, only corresponding with neighbouring nations various times before going back to a state of isolation. However, with Twilight's meteoric rise to power (and fame), the discovery and/or invention of new technology boomed. No longer will Equestria be trapped in a state of stagnation.

Yet, despite all of this, tensions rise all across the world as the Changelings quickly industrialised as well, catching up with the rest of the world. Worried about this new development, the Princesses has issued a state of emergency across the nation, motivating the citizens of Equestria to join its military. Will they be prepared for the Changeling threat -- or will they face a much bigger problem within?


based on the Hearts of Iron IV mod, "Equestria at War".
note: chapter updates will be inconsistent, but i will try to finish them in a week or two.


chapters are now edited by: Massimo


on a hiatus until further notice -- assets are being diverted into other projects

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )
JackRipper
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Not a bad start, and a unique concept to boot. Could use a little touching up though.

Keep it up!

Quite the interesting start to what I hope to be become a good story.

I'd love to see more here!

8471660
I'll do just that, sir ! thanks !

Premise's interesting. I presume this is going to be a built up to war?

Good start. I'll be tracking this.

8471870
and more you shall have !!

8472175
between the name and cover image, i think that its based off of it

8472175
this story is based on a HoI4 game I had w/ the mod

8472146
im glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

You have a problem with tenses at points. Most of the time it's past tense, so when you slip into present tense it's rather jarring. Also, you have several typos.

I wish you luck with he rest of the story. :twilightsmile:

8531231
Aye, my editor noticed

we'll be sure to keep an eye out for any typos and grammatical errors yo

Seeing an update from this was nice.

And into „never completed” folder it goes

By the way very good story. I would like you to see start writing it again

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