Her Human

Ron Jeremy Pony #1 · Sep 27th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

Over all I enjoyed the story. One could argue that this happened shortly after unification. And having a medieval setting for the story in the human world was a nice touch.

Chronokat

Chronokat #2 · Sep 27th, 2017 · 2 · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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Man this needs a additional chapter ...... it'd be great to see how there relationship works out when it's out in the open. Plus the look on her families faces when she goes to there executions as she's all dressed up as a lady in waiting to the current ruler.

kildeez

kildeez #3 · Sep 27th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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I'll have to think about it

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thanks for reading!

Zyrian

Zyrian #4 · Sep 27th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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Holy hell that was a ride.

Speedy Silverstreak

Speedy Silverstreak #5 · Sep 27th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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At least it was a sorta happy ending. Maybe do a chapter where her worthless family can be killed in various humorous torture ways.

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #6 · Sep 27th, 2017 · 3 · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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A nice story. Her family deserved it and she earned it to be reunited with her friend(lover). I had hoped that the girl could manage to get her reprieved but that works too. I feel kinda bad for the children, nobody derserves something like that at such a young age

Rosegfx

Rosegfx #7 · Sep 28th, 2017 · 3 · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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Damn, I didn't know what to think of after first seeing this story, but I gave it a shot when I saw who wrote it. I must say that this was a great story, I don't believe I've read anything with a similar plot .-. why haven't I ever seen other "Ponies Enslave Medieval Humans" stories before? Meh. Anyway I feel like this story should have an epilogue now, either after the night of this chapter, a couple years in the future when everything is stabilised, or even if Celestia finds out what that family did and we see her attempt to enter this world. Either way, it needs an epilogue

PuppetXMaster

PuppetXMaster #8 · Sep 28th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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one question....is it anthro? that pic makes me think it is

Mr cold ghost

Mr cold ghost #9 · Sep 28th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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Loved it! I too sorta of want to see a follow up of maybe celestia tracking down the family to find out what they had done.

kildeez

kildeez #10 · Sep 28th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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afraid not, mate. I just felt anthro kinda got the plot across better.

kildeez

kildeez #11 · Sep 28th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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To all asking for an epilogue: Yeah, I think I'll do one, just don't expect it anytime soon

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #12 · Sep 28th, 2017 · 1 · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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I looking forward to see it.

Stardust-pony

Stardust-pony #13 · Sep 28th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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Wow

Phoen1x

Phoen1x #14 · Sep 29th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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I wasn't super paying attention to editing issues while reading, but I did notice a "seeing to it" that should probably be "seeing as".

I'll be keeping my eye out for that epilogue.

kildeez

kildeez #15 · Sep 29th, 2017 · · · Just a Human and Her Unicorn ·

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thanks for the editing suggestion and the words of encouragement!

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #16 · Dec 13th, 2017 · 4 · · After ·

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Guinevere, a really nice name. Twinkle's sister should cinsider themselves lucky they got spared by her, able to make up for their mistakes, mercy can be a great weapon. As for you Twinkle, it doesn't matter what they say about you and your lover, as long as you are happy. Enjoy every second of it.

Rosegfx