Over all I enjoyed the story. One could argue that this happened shortly after unification. And having a medieval setting for the story in the human world was a nice touch.

Man this needs a additional chapter ...... it'd be great to see how there relationship works out when it's out in the open. Plus the look on her families faces when she goes to there executions as she's all dressed up as a lady in waiting to the current ruler.

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I'll have to think about it

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thanks for reading!

Holy hell that was a ride.

At least it was a sorta happy ending. Maybe do a chapter where her worthless family can be killed in various humorous torture ways.

A nice story. Her family deserved it and she earned it to be reunited with her friend(lover). I had hoped that the girl could manage to get her reprieved but that works too. I feel kinda bad for the children, nobody derserves something like that at such a young age

Damn, I didn't know what to think of after first seeing this story, but I gave it a shot when I saw who wrote it. I must say that this was a great story, I don't believe I've read anything with a similar plot .-. why haven't I ever seen other "Ponies Enslave Medieval Humans" stories before? Meh. Anyway I feel like this story should have an epilogue now, either after the night of this chapter, a couple years in the future when everything is stabilised, or even if Celestia finds out what that family did and we see her attempt to enter this world. Either way, it needs an epilogue

one question....is it anthro? that pic makes me think it is

Loved it! I too sorta of want to see a follow up of maybe celestia tracking down the family to find out what they had done.

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afraid not, mate. I just felt anthro kinda got the plot across better.

To all asking for an epilogue: Yeah, I think I'll do one, just don't expect it anytime soon

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I looking forward to see it.

Wow

I wasn't super paying attention to editing issues while reading, but I did notice a "seeing to it" that should probably be "seeing as".

I'll be keeping my eye out for that epilogue.

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thanks for the editing suggestion and the words of encouragement!