Hey, I didn't ask for any of this!
I didn't plan for any of this to happen. I didn't die or anything to get to this land filled with talking techni-coloured ponies called Equestria. I have no idea why I'm here, or how I got here. I don't even know where here is!
I just popped into Daring Do's body and now I'm hearing nothing but her yelling at me and blaming me for everything. Let me just set that straight, because you don't know what I know.
I Pinkie Promise by all that is holy, this was all Daring Do's fault!
Chapters (3)
I love it so far!
Wow daring is kind of a bitch
I'm loving this! Its awesome. Not wait to see more.:3
I like this, funny and written well. Can hardly wait for the next chapter!
ho xD
tis funy i ike it
Funny so far.
Hopefully you can find a way to break up the back and forth conversation a little unless they can straighten out who's in charge of the body. It kinda makes the narration drag along a bit.
Is this a Pick Your Own Story ?
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No.
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Well, who wouldn't be one in her place?
A very good first real venture into fiction!
Has potential, following to see where it goes, and i do hope your chapters will be relatively bigger than your second one.
The best medium i found of chapter length would be anywhere from 4 to 6-7 thousand words with plenty spaces and breaks between paragraphs and sentences,
Hope i help a little ;)
oh if the next chapter is just as good as the past two I'm favoriting it
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Thank you! I do plan on writing larger chapters; I just have such a limited amount of time each week right now, much less each day to write and by that logic, I may only be able to put out chapters every couple weeks (or weekly if I pull some all-nighters, so nothing new). Thank you for the comment.
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I'll make sure it's top quality
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then I look forward to reading it
Wait till Rainbow Dash see your 'body' sing this.
Because of having an account from before the bookshelves update, where favorites and read it later were the only options for tracking a story, and reorganizing the stories from favorites to more appropriately titled bookshelves is a daunting prospect once you exceed a few hundred stories?
And that having the story in favorites makes it easier to find and locate specific stories later since you can search in that, whereas likes only serve as a rating to the story for others, or are only helpful if you happen across it in the wild later?
But sure, I'll like this.
I imagined this, but with Daring Do's voice
I like this, can't wait for the next chapter!
Be honest: None of us would take it any better.
I can't wait to read it!
Daring didn't know yet what to write in her new book?
Interesting premise.
I'm curious what will happen next.
Found two small errors:
Should be: "How about starting with unfurling your wings?"
Should be "ever".
In Alucard's voice: "I'm going for a walk."
Good chapter.
But I get the feeling she isn't entirely in the dark about what happened.
Maybe it has something to do with that "odd amulet thing" mentioned last chapter.
Small suggestion:
Better: "No. No no no NO NO!" (since she says "shouting" in the next paragraph.)
Forgotton word:
Insert "can" like this.
I love this story! Very funny and well written
well i am a man of my word you got yourself a favorite
Loving this! Keep it up!
WOOOHOO! So much fun! As far as fight scenes against completely inept foes go, I'd say it was done pretty well, but I'm no critic after all. Over all, keep up the good work.
Actually it supposedly releases built up pockets of air in your joints, so it might actually be beneficial.
I wonder if Sorting Algorythm of Evil is going to be mentioned. =)
Just the usual madness, it seems.
Good chapter!
I'm curious what will happen next.
Hopefully he lands on something soft; like a pillow or something.
Other note: Don't apologize for short and/or late chapters. real live is always more important than this one.
Found a few typos:
Missing "the".
Missing "of".
(...why do I always
Suggestion: use "the" here, since he knows him.
I love this! Can't wait for more
Yeah Daring Do is not a nice mare.
Because people use favorites as a read it later option?
Yeah being Daring Do kinda sucks.
just waiting on the next chapter dont mind me
Always a good sign
I think we can all agree, that this is all totally the hat/helemt's fault and not the obviously "something you should not actually put on Daring" amulet
Oh geez, that's a though one Daring... hmm, might it possibly have something to do with THE AMULET THAT YOU FOR SOME REASON PUT ON
Which type of cult are we talking here, the idiots in the woods or the multi-million bits private army types
You don't wanna know
THE AMULET AROUND YOUR NECK
.... You should make a drinking game out of it
Such a gentlecolt
is the story dead
More please dont let it die
Please tell me that the story titles pun does not entail Lauren Faust being in Daring Do's body.
She obviously hasn't heard of the dreaded 'Song that never ends'. ...Kinda want him/her/THEM to sing it now.
Please tell me Twilight and Rainbow get involved somehow.
Is there any chance for new chapters?
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Eventually, yes! Just working on a new story at the mo. I know this story has fallen into the inevitable pit of “HiE” stories that havent got updated in ages, but I’ll do my best.
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its been more then a year
More pls
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Daring Do is as much of an idiot as she says the new person in the drivers seat is.
I'll prepare the funeral