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Been writing fan fiction for most of my life. Brony since March 2011.


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You have done good, young Padawan, but you are yet to be finished. Report to me once your task is complete...

Lol. I love this sir far, and I'd love to see more! Thanks for writing it! :pinkiehappy:

Still trying to protect Spike's innocence, huh, Twilight? I'm pretty sure he's gonna figure it out for himself if you don't tell him. :twilightblush:

A little something to get them more in the mood, eh? Hope Sunburst doesn't goof it up and add more than needed.

It would be intressting if Starlight ends up pregnant and in the end there is a baby runing round Twilights castle bringing choas like Flurry heart did

great chapter hope you will update soon

8481315 I'm pretty sure she's already prepared for that, which is why she took that book from Twilight's library without telling her. :duck:

Okay thanks for the reply cna't wait for the next chapter

That fourth wall break, genius!

:twilightsheepish: Thanks, I've always wanted to do one of those effectively.

Oh Pinkie. Neverchange.

And you are a sly one Miles for thinking that.

Another great chapter I can't wait for the next one i hope you can update again soon

Already writing out snippets of the next chapter.

Twilight, you're not gonna find the book. Trust me, you're better off not knowing where it went or what Starlight needs it for. :twilightoops:

"Was this always this big? Could've sworn it was a twin..."

Twilight, really!? :rainbowlaugh:

You can't protect the Innocence of Spike!!! Pimp the dragon maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

With Starlight's spells, she's not pulling out for the entire weekend.

What's in the tiny box?

Not tiny. It's Starlight's kites.

The first time doing it and already Starlight's taking charge. Still, I'm curious as to what's going to happen with those pearls. :eeyup:

She closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and mentally recited the incantation, "et oblinito cuniculum".

Give that name I can see I few things which could go wrong, however, it does look like it sealed the right end of the tunnel. Probably best not to let Trixie try that one out given her track record.

8491911 Don't let Trixie near any magic spells in general.

Oh, already going for the pearls? I guess that's to be expected though, Starlight never does anything half-way. Sure hope Sunburst's ready for the night of his life. :raritywink:

So sweet. Nice idea for seeing the sights and flying.

Wasn't expecting the drama, not that I'm complaining. Can't wait to see what the pearls do, just hope Starlight's spell lasts more than one night. :yay:

Looks like second time's the charm for these two.

Luna's dream realm enshrouded them simultaneously.

Kinda wonder now how many ponies Luna encounters a night who fell asleep shortly after sex. Also, makes you wonder how she handles wet dreams o.O

Suddenly, you start to either pity, become gravely concerned for, or down right jealous of the princess of the night...

You still haven't figured it out yet, Twilight? Or do you just know of the book's title and not its contents? :twilightblush:

I think she knows exactly what Starlight used it for, but cannot get over the fact that Starlight didn't check it out properly.

8509913 That is definitely what Twilight would do in that sort of situation. :rainbowlaugh:

Good story. I like the ending, lol Twilight.

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed!

et oblinito cuniculum

*checks Google Translate*
That's amazing

I'm so happy when readers go translate my Starlight spells. Thanks for reading! :twilightblush:

Okay. I'm not gonna lie. I lost No-Nut-November because of this.

Haha, jk! Good work though, bro!

The only problem I have with this story is your use of the word hiss. Hiss generally means to say something in a disapproving or angry manner. It’s not the kind of word you would want to associate with sex. But other than that, this is some top notch clop. Keep up the good work:heart:!

Damn, the Latin for tunnel is seriously cuniculum? There's no way that isn't cognate with cunnus. The question then is which was derived from the other?

Google Translate is spotty when it comes to latin, so take my translations with a grain of salt.

Nooooooo! Must read more! Anyone know if he's going to post more chapters??

I'd love it if this got a third installment where they decide to have a foal.

or get "hitched"
hehe horse puns

"i'm sad, let's go fuck each other's brains out"
unorthodox response, but i guess it works

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