The only problem I have with this story is your use of the word hiss. Hiss generally means to say something in a disapproving or angry manner. It’s not the kind of word you would want to associate with sex. But other than that, this is some top notch clop. Keep up the good work!
Looks like second time's the charm for these two.
Kinda wonder now how many ponies Luna encounters a night who fell asleep shortly after sex. Also, makes you wonder how she handles wet dreams o.O
Suddenly, you start to either pity, become gravely concerned for, or down right jealous of the princess of the night...
The only problem I have with this story is your use of the word hiss. Hiss generally means to say something in a disapproving or angry manner. It’s not the kind of word you would want to associate with sex. But other than that, this is some top notch clop. Keep up the good work!