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The Psychopath


My very first (self-published) book can be found on Amazon Kindle for 5 or 12 paperback! If you love dragons, give it a look! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CSM7QQ2M

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Many people have dreams. Some have small dreams that are easily accomplished, and they are satisfied with it. Others have dreams so big it requires a lot of time and effort to accomplish it, but many do so if they have the conviction.

One such stallion has actually bent the laws of time and space to travel between realities just to accomplish this. He just wants one success after the millions of years he's tried. He is currently at his fifty-fifth try.


This is the prequel to the story I'll write in the future called 'The Weary Traveler'.

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Okay what is this guy trying to prevent, it better be big because destroying an entire world is a big deal.

Can't wait for the sequel to find out.

Interesting. Really annoying that ponies just hate everything out of the ordinary, but what can you do? Besides kill them all, that is.

I'm... not sure what message you're trying to tell with this prologue, because all that's happened so far is that every accusation Celestia and Luna hurled in this guy's way turned out to be correct. "Obey me instantly or die, you have no choice."

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Well, it's implied he's never done this before. His change in behavior should indicate that.

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That's still not really painting this guy as benevolent as he claims himself to be. He shows up with a huge armed ship, proclaims he knows the one true way to salvation and when the rulers don't buy what he's selling and treat an armed invasion like, well, an armed invasion he gets angry and commits full genocide.

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I never said he was benevolent. Just because someone says they're something doesn't make it fully true.

The reasons for the destruction are also mentioned discreetly.

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