• Member Since 16th Jan, 2017
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Sornos


a crossover specialist working hard to make his mark.

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the cheetah. fastest land mammal... one such one who is down on his luck gets a second chance in a new world. what kind of crazy adventures will he get into? one things for sure. this is exactly what he needs!

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 24 )

This requires talent.

I'm liking it man. :pinkiehappy: this will be awesome. :twilightsmile::heart:

thank you so much!

Eqsturia? Advtures? Seriously man? Did you type this up on your phone with autocorrect turned off?

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one i just didn't catch those so thanks. but two DON'T BE A JERK ABOUT MY MISTAKES!

8450337 haha, that's what I do with my story.

Improvement. Nice :) Also, " Nice to meet you Sokudo" should be "Nice to meet you, Sokudo" I thing english uses that "," there when they are referring to someone. Don't worry tho! It was pretty well written, despite(?) the errors ;)

8454442
oh okay. it has gone through editing once already so thanks for pointing that out.

8454444
Tricky business, I guess :)

8454475
pm me with how bad the errors are.

Comment posted by darkstone57 deleted Oct 4th, 2017
Comment posted by darkstone57 deleted Oct 4th, 2017

Why did my comments get deleted?

8465536
sorry man but i didt want to keep uo them up. please dont get mad.

8465922

i was afraid if i kept up a harsh (even if true) comment it would push other readers away.

8465929
You do realise by admitting that here - you’ve, even involuntarily, dug your own grave if someone catches on.

8465970
ya i done goofed.

8465978
Well, to those who do, let them know I’m not fussed about this. Sornos simply took my advice and that’s all.

8465981
thanks for not being mad.

Good Story ^^ and where's next chapter ?

10042744
sorry man, insperation is dry.

10042751
Oh man that's suck .. :(

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