Spike starts haning around Sweet Apple Acres again. Twilight fears another "Spike At Your Service" incident is inpending, then Spike admits he has a crush on Apple Bloom. Ignoring Twilight's advice he decides to ask the younger girl out.

NOTE: For the purpose of this story Apple Bloom is only two years younger than Spike. Even though in canon it's closer to a five or six year age gap.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 46 )

Very cute story!, just one question:
Did Apple Bloom have feelings towards Spike before the date?

Yeah, I should have done a better job impling that.

SpikeBloom is one of the few ships I personally like. Definitely, deserves a like and a follow.

Actually one convincing fan theory states that Applebloom is actually older then Spike.
The theory goes that since we never see Applejack's parents in the Cutie mark chronicles episode they must have already been dead at that point. Thus Applebloom had to have already been born at the time Spike was born. Making her at the very least a few weeks older then Spike.

no offence, but PLEASE get an editor or fix your mistakes. good concept, poor punctuation.

Would you do a one-shot on Spike and the CMC?

That's not a fan theory. That's simple logic, supported by the show canon.

I thought I fixed most of it.

I was more basing it off of what we know about Twilight's age. She's at least ten or so years younger than Shining Armour. And given the age she was at in season one she's around twenty four now. And Spike is at least seven or so years younger than Twilight. So he'd be about sixteen right now.

The CMC are like twelve or thirteen in the current season. So Apple Bloom would be five years younger. Though them being the same age isn't unrealstic. It'd help if we knew how dragon aging worked. But we don't becuase most of it is conflicting.

I also just mentioned the age thing because I know people think it's creepy for a seventeen year old to date a twelve year old. Even if they're the same maturity level.

I would like that. I just don't have any ideas for one.

On a side note in a longer fic I plan on writing, it does involve Spike interacting with the CMC.

Remember when Spike was pet-sitting the Mane 6's pets while Angel been the 'pest of the west' making mischief, ask the CMC's help to catch him, and train-leading to the Crystal Empire and the CMC want to check it out?

The CMC along with their new friends Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon wanted Spike to go with him to the Crystal Empire for a tour, leading to introducing Flurry Heart and adorable shenanigans and Cadence royalty shipping Spike with the girls.

That sounds cool. Is that your idea for me to write?

If it is please post it here so I don't forget:

I just went over it again and there still were mistakes. Try looking again, if you don't mind.

Could you please point them out to me? (I'll even credit you in the description for editing)'

sure, i'll try my best.

Jim Miller say that their character ages aren't set and they can be any age you want them to be. He said dragon aged slower than ponies but thought Spike was 10-12 in dragon years and 16-22 in pony years. I did the following calculation:
10 dragon years X 1.6 = 16 pony years
12 dragon years X 1.84 = 22.08 pony years
There was that red dragon that was going to sleep for a hundred years or G3 Spike woke up from a thousand year nap. G3 Spike consider an old dragon to be a million years old.

Spike being 16 seems reasonable to me.

It's simply logic yes. But it relies on the detail that Applejack's parents are dead by the time Applejack leaves in her flashback. Something that could prove to be false. Until that part is confirmed the theory has to technically be classified as a fan theory.

So it's more likely that AJ's still alive parents were apparently so busy that they couldn't see her off when she went to live with someone else as a foal?

And that somehow holds more water than their parents already being dead and AB being a baby?

Ok, sure. :ajbemused:

Did you get around to it?

Oh no. Obviously it is FAR more likely they were dead by the time she left. It's just that until that detail is confirmed in someway it can't called a fact and has to be labeled a theory. It's a theory that is likely true since all the evidence points to it, but it's still technically a theory.

not yet, just seeing if there is any I missed. also i've been too addicted to FIMFiction and youtube. so yeah, might take a bit.

Ok, i found things to edit.

to = too
latley = lately
spagheti = spaghetti.

And that is all I found, but you may just wanna look again in case.

Alright thank you.

*salutes and walks off*

Honestly the romance felt really rushed, you should have given it time to breathe and settle naturally but I really like this pairing, my third favorite out of Spikealoo and SpikeBelle and you made me laugh. Great job. Work on a few errors and maybe flesh this story out more, I'd love to see it keep going. Here if you need me.

Well thanks. I'm trying to write a sequel, but not sure what direction to take it.

Why'd you ask this on my story?

Curious you don't have to give if you don't want to








Alright here's the sequel:

ELovely Bloom
Boyfriends are great, until they cause more problems then you intended. Or at least you think they do.
Tilgoreth · 2.5k words  ·  25  4 · 470 views

hey i did a reading on this here you go https://youtu.be/YjwzGoohs_M

Login or register to comment