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Awkward.

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I read this without seeing the episode because context is for the weak. Trying to work out the content of the episode from this was pretty mind-bending.

Interesting premise. I almost thought there would be a twist and she loves him afterwards while he loathes himself.

Shit, man. That was depressing and kinky at the same time. Bravo. This was an awesome story, I hope it gets the recognition it deserves. Have an upvote and a fave, I hardly ever do it but... Damn, I feel I need to.

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Uhh.... I didn't even think about the fact that 80% of the readers probably haven't seen the episode. It probably does not flow well without the episode. I'm sorry. Major brain hiccup on that one. lol. Still, it was just a couple of hours of work, so whatevs. And I had fun writing it. Pro-tip - There's still something going on with Petunia and him, but he's absolutely terrified of it and her, and she is super pissed at him, and will continue to be so. He wants to apologize, to tell her that he really does/did love her, and more, but can't due to the glamor. So he tries really hard to just not think about any of that. There's a few lines where he tries to apologize, or at least thinks an apology for her, and then actively dismisses her because he can't afford to feel for her while he's "loving" on Sugar... And she... well, he was her first.


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lol. Thanks. Don't feel like it deserves much attention, so I'm not too worried. The story I'm putting a lot of love into right now is Silicon Hearts | Empty Minds, and I'm probably putting like 60% into Double Down. Appreciate the thoughts!

Fucked up, but in a way that suits the darkness.

This was weird, but satisfying nonetheless. Honestly wanted to have Closed Curtains do more things, or get the reluctant dick.

I thought I recognized this dark, metaphoric psycological style! Well played, you may yet become a rather guilty pleasure of mine.

Oh my gawd this was good. So provocative, so compelling. I love the glamor, it's like a curse. The supporting characters were excellent. I loved when they were making that pony ladder to spy--like cartoon comedy gold. I wish there had been more cucking for Red. And it started so sweet and innocent, with a dark flavor, then veered into awful. Mastapeece!

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