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Scootaloo is now a young mare living through her teen years. After an event in school causes her to break down and fall into a deep depression, she locks herself inside of the old CMC Clubhouse, threatening to take her own life.
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Rated 'Teen' for themes.
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I get this is suppose to be a depressing story about suicide but could you possibly do a second chapter or sequel where they actually save her? She just has to throw up the pills to delay their effect so they have time to get her to a hospital
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I probably will add that scene, but only time will tell. If I did, I think I'll do it as a sequel. I think I'm just going to wait to see how this one turns out before I do anything else. At most, I'd give it a week or so.
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I'll make sure to follow you to know
To add what speedy said you could have ab kick the door in as well
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That was actually going to be what I intended Apple Bloom to do shortly after discovering that Scootaloo took the pills and she refused to open the door, but since I wrote this without planning, I didn't know what to do. But, hey, I think I'll add that into the sequel.
Woah... That was.. good. Like REALLY good. You need to write that sequel. LIKE NOW!!
The feels DA FEELZ!
I love it, hope there's another coming, I'd love to see what happens next
Need an epilogue, always love to see the aftermath.
I think this was really well written and I also vote on that sequel. Either way, I really like your work so keep at it!
the story is 10/10 in my book but...god is that picture creepy lol
where the hell does one even get cyanide pills anyways? wouldn't it be a bit tricky to get them?
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Believe me, in fiction or in real life, you'll be surprised where one might acquire them. Anywho, if you're curious about the answer, all you need to do is read the next two stories after this one!
y'know
i don't think you could've made the thumbnail anymore horrifying
s-s-scootaloo no!