Twilight Gets a Puppy
By TDR
Winter Woof up
Epilogue
[Canterlot]
Celestia raised an eyebrow watching as Cadence and Luna bounced around the room fluttering their wings lightly to remain airborne a bit longer with each hop off their tippy hooves.
The sound of two grown mares squeeing and bouncing around, one of them in the Royal Canterlot voice was enough to draw Celestia's attention away from her last duties of the day to check on the noise.
The Princess of the sun had only peeked her head into Cadence's study and stopped completely at the sight before her. The Night and Heart Guard on either side of the door made a slight bow of their heads to Celestia but didn't announce her, not wanting to interrupt the insane bouncing the pair were doing.
“Why.....?” Celestia started to ask.
“Shipping sense.” The Heart Guard to her left offered up.
Celestia mulled that over for a second “What...?”
“One of her alicorn powers.” the Night Guard stated flatly. “ I seriously doubt any of us can explain it.”
“When?” Celestia stammered.
“About twenty minutes ago.” The first Guard answered. “ Princess Luna came in about ten minutes ago and they started doing this.”
“How.....”
“Hard to explain princess. She just gets hints every so often.” the Heart Guard added. “She is the Princess of Love after all.”
“Who?” Celestia asked getting the joke and simply playing along now.
“Likely some one she has been waiting on for a while.” The Night Guard considered.
“If I were to hazard a guess Princess with this reaction I would expect either Rahs or one of the other Sparkle siblings in Ponyville has found a special some pony.” the Heart Guard added.
Celestia pictured the pink pony princess prance and pronk past her position periodically pausing to pirouette perfectly.
Luckily Luna leapt laughingly leading the locomotion laps lazily leftward in a lope, looping the library's lounge.
After a few moments of this Celestia pulled back out of the room with a mutter.
“We shall come back later.” Delicately the Diarch of the day ducked discreetly to depart, determined to devour a delectable doughnut from the diner downtown, to duck this dominoing disaster for definite.
So… how long before Shining Armor makes a special visit to Ponyville to murder AJ's brother?
8981132 IF he can murder Big Mac. I’ve never seen Big Mac and Shining Armor in the same shot.
personal i love twiligthXbig mac ships wish there were more of them out there that ship is most likey my favor straight ship
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Straight ships are the best kind
I’m kinda worried about one of the princess’s pushing too hard and ruining this for Twilight
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Said princess is named Celestia, for she will inform Twilight’s parents of this most wonderful development in their daughter’s life.
I loved the Alliteration, Simply stunning and excellent execution of wonderful words.
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i prefer twilluna and twicadance, and twirairty, but then goes twimac and twilblood, and twishy,
but I prefer one of thme to be futa
I want to pay respect to you, the author. Your skill at using words is truely unmatched.
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Doesn't matter if ship is straight or not. What matters is if it's well written, and/or if the sex is hot.
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Cadence is keeping him distracted. Also Shiny only knows Twi likes Mac, not anything past that.
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Luna is the only one really pushing for a ship, with Cadence right behind her offering deals on various boat builders. Celestia's not dealing with it.
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8981250 one of these days i'll manage something akin to the V for Vendetta rant.
8981352 Well since i don't write clop fics the latter will have to be all in your head.... or realistically, somewhere on the internet.
You wrote an epilogue just so you could post that, didn't you?
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maaaaaaaybe
Oddly enough, I envision that Cadence is the one squeeing in the Royal Canterlot Voice.
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ey good chapter i'm sorry i dropped the ball on ya
I think I just learned ever word that starts with P, L, and, D in the dictionary!
I think Celestia is far too sane to join in on the shipping unfortunately. Her loss though!
Nicely done.
Ah, the shenanigans has been doubled!
Okay, I'm done.
Well done with that word use at the end
Well done alliteration too.
U did this chapter just for this gag didnt u?
... Well played author well played
Okay, so, thought on this episode. Not bad, really fun, not one of my favs, but still really really fun. Could tell the story was trying really hard to have the same overall major events go down, without just copying the original ep, and for the most part they worked well enough. Lot of really really fun bits, but as epic as the ongoing fight between Rahs and Angel was, it's the sort of thing that would have been far more fun to see. Though the commentary on it was epic. Little disappointed we didn't get Twilight showing how important having somepony organizing these things are. Though a lot of what got screwed up last time got fixed through other means now, even if it doesn't solve the underlying issue Ponyville has with this. So yeah, interesting fun episode. If a bit heavy on the reference humor concentration for me. So, notes.
Oh Ponyville, give it a few more years, and I'm sure the town will have plans in place for any conceivable issue, rather then going all ad hoc on finding a way to deal with the 'vampire pony'. And in their defense, this IS Ponyville,would you doubt a Vampony showing up there at some point? Given it did happen after all.
The entire insurance negotiation scene was GLORIOUS! All hail Dr. Choppy, Attorney at Law! Also, NEVER try to out loophole Twilight Sparkle, she will find a way to make you pay for it.
Now, interesting to think on why this doesn't trigger Spike's Greed Growth. Is it simply not quite enough to trigger it? Or that he was buying it rather then just taking it? Or a case of much of it not really meant to be hoarded, but stuff to share with anypony he can get to sit down to an O&O game with him? Or something else all together?
I just love Rahs, rocking the heart shorts, the bathrobe, just not caring long as it's comfy.
The dangers of CMCship Spike, getting dragged off to their schemes at all hours. No rest for the insurance adjuster nightmares!
Ehhhh, the whole 'we practiced the song' is fun joke, but, IDK, just prefer these things be something utterly spontaneous.
Rahs just can't escape the insanity, enjoy that straw hat.I'd say that ability will come in handy in a bit over a season, but something tells me you'll be a bit too busy with other major shit to help cover for Rarity.
So how much longer till the CMC are given very, very important jobs that require spending all of WWU far away from everyone else like Pinkie?
Twilight, you should know by now, do not try to logic things in this town, That said, much prefer Twi's epic fail the first time when it came to waking up animals. Plus, I just can't buy this being possible. There is no way Angel would sleep for months at a time, he'd miss out on far too much chaos, destruction, and endless attention and service from his pony-slave.
Very, very good aim Celestia. And she's gotten to the point she knows anytime some large mass shows up, the CMC and Spike are at it again.
Caramel, you just can't not screw up, can you?
Poor Big Mac, trapped under the snow with a pent up mare that wants him. So, how long till she brought up how cold it was, and how they'd be better off snuggling together for warmth?
Of course she has 'Shipping Senses'. And of course her guards are used to reacting to it. Now I'm picturing her flying over Canterlot, scanning crowds for likely couples that need a push, and then breaking out a megaphone to yell "Just kiss already!" down to any she sees.
Also really nice bit about her guards, well thought out. And "Cake hunters". Well let's face it, as effective as the Guard are at dealing with threats, their greatest service really might be keeping Celestia supplied with mood stabilizing cake at all times. Not to mention keeping Luna away from the coffee. But this brings up the question of why 'Heart Breakers' what do those mares do to earn that title?
Again, the betting scene was amazing, and some just refusing not to make some dumb bets. Plus, very smart RD! And just, the image of all those pegasi flying a cloud around to watch the action is so damn hilarious.
Krillin Pie........
CUTIE MARK CRUSADER PARAMEDICS YAY!!!
And suddenly, from that day forth, no pony in Ponyville was ever sick or injured. r at least would never admit to it. Best health care ever.
I'm sure Cadance would be more then happy to help with finding some stallion to help with that 'buck me' request Twilight.
That alliteration..... just.... I am at once impressed, in awe, and horrified at where this might lead. So damn awesome.
Oh ho! So much alliteration! It reminds me of this...
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https://youtu.be/kVE-mncKFsA
I'm a bit late here
I am not going to admit how many times I had to re read this line
Huh... Neat! Twilight magic and Big Red's physic... Natural born Horned earthpony is a go?
*Proceeds to skip the aliteration*
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Heretic.
Now we only need to ship the rest of the main six...
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Get the flamer. The heavy flamer
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You're not supposed to whip it around like a pool noodle! NOOO!! Don't CRANK UP YOUR DPI!!!
This reminds me of V for vendetta when he introduced himself using all those v words very good reference
Twilight gets a colt friend