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Alex Warlorn


Just your average Brony who happened upon an idea that might actually turn out to be clever enough for guys to love.

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Discord beaten. Reality restored. But invisible wounds must heal too. Time for butterflies to spread their wings. Dying is easy. Living the real challenge. After the dust settles it's time to LIVE.

Season three of the Pony POV Series is here on FIM.

Take a look at the citizens of Ponyville one by one as their decisions effect not only themselves, but each other.

Laughter, tears, smiles, actions, adventure, frights, darkness and light and heart-warmings ALL await you!

The Audio adaption Is here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GqJMx6kYyU&list=PLABD0AEFCD46D56DA&feature=plcp
ORIGINAL fan-art, ORIGINAL fan-music and VOICE ACTORS galore await!

I promise this will be one ride that will not disappoint.

Recursive fanart and fan stories are here. http://alexwarlorn.deviantart.com/journal/MLP-FiM-Pony-POV-Series-Fanworks-audio-adaption-274110361 Many are rubber stamped by me as optional canon stories that reveal some of other sides of these stories.

Tropes page found here. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/PonyPOVSeries

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 731 )

I had to look up "saudade". That doesn't happen to me too often.

It's going to be sad to see Trixie go.:pinkiesad2:
I sure hope to see her again soon.:pinkiesmile:

That was an odd chapter. Kinda hard to follow everything going on, but I'm pretty sure it was making reference to prior gens.

Yeah, she ran... from a bear with a foreleg about the size of her entire wagon. And I'd take a bit of pleasure too with dispensing justice to those who legit started it, Twilight. Applejack, Rarity and Dash all deserved what they got. And for the record, Trixie had two avenues of escape open to her in that street and could have ignored those two. Instead, she tried. Your friends, did nothing. I defy someone to tell Honest Applejack about that. :ajsleepy:

Anyway, as usual, very cool. I hope she comes back.

I really like how you were able to write it Zecora's character. It must have taken you awhile to get all the rhymes correctly. It was well worth it.

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YES IT WAS HARD! My beta-reader threw a LOT of help into that one! More than normal!

I am an innocent forest animal... you're getting sleepy.

Forgive me, but this chapter has me utterly confused.:applejackconfused:
What was this about anyway?:twilightblush:

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It was about Princess Celestia. And her thoughts and feelings. And things only she remembers.

Remember the G3 world? Those were Celestia's memories of it.

This definitely put a new perspective on the nurses in Ponyville. Nurse RedHeart truly and utterly cares for her patients.:yay:

I took me a little bit to realize that they were talking to Owlowiscious. I thought that was cute. :twilightsmile:

948600 By the way, what is the G3 world?

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Technically G2 was never made into a cartoon. But for purposes of narrative the MLPT verse counts as the second age here.

Awesome rhyming with Zecora. It's one of the reasons I dread writing her.

Also, good on her to apologize to Luna.

I got it... sorta. But Celestia, you were wrong with how you dealt with Fluttershy.

Nah, she saw a sea pony. They're not all dead. Anyway, nice look into the pets.

Hey, do you have a cover ready for the Origins arc?

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The Generation Transitions and Origins Arc will be posted as the same season. So I'd need an image that would cover both.

That interview was cute. I like how close Moonlight (*cough* Luna *cough*) is to Pip. She just has to be a little less possesive.:raritywink:

Quite cute, there. And yeah, Discord missed some. It's a big world, and there's lots of hiding places...:rainbowdetermined2:

958630 He's already made references, and what Moonlight said was pretty darned right there, so not really...

958854 I'm saying he's made references to the flutter and sea ponies being wiped out. I believe some were missed. Some had to be missed.

Anyone know if there's a language for this site's format for different text sizes?

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It can actually go higher or lower, but too low and it's unreadable.

Fluttercruel making Fluttershy eating a hamburger.:rainbowlaugh:
In any case, I really liked this chapter.

Er, not to be the elephant in the room, but how do you expect new readers to understand what's going on in this chapter if you skipped over AJ's dreams? The whole talk about the princess's warnings seems very hollow if you exclude that chapter. You're going to either need to modify this chapter heavily, or reupload AJ's dreams at an earlier point in this story. Skipping over Luna's stories is acceptable, but this is where I as a reader from deviant art have to draw the line.

Sorry.

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Huh?

*checks*

WHY DIDN'T ANYONE BLOODY SAY I HAD SKIPPED THOSE CHAPTERS?!!? NOW I NEED TO RENUMBER EVERYTHING!!!!

CRUDE CRUDE
CRUDE CRUDE
CRUDE CRUDE
CRUDE CRUDE
CRUDE CRUDE!!!

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Three episodes were accidentally skipped. They've been uploaded now.

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Three episodes were accidentally skipped. They've been uploaded now.

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The three missing episodes have been uploaded now. All at once.

Well buck me, the Nightmare Granfalloon timeline is insanely disturbing. At least it wouldn't breach the fourth wall, right?

Quite nice, par usual. Good dissection of Fluttershy, metaphorically speaking. As for Sunny Town... like I said. At this point oblivion would be better, and they've paid their share a thousand fold. I got a mean streak sometimes, but even I have my limits.

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