The TwiDash Family

by Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever

Arrived At Ponyville

30 minutes later, they arrived at Ponyville the train stopped and they got off their friends were there so they told their story

“Wow that was a really good story I loved the restaurant part,” Pinkie Pie said.

“Um, I like it when um, Rainbow Dash played with, Rainbow Light,” Fluttershy said, everypony agreed that was their favourite part, except Pinkie Pie.

And once again for the first time The TwiDash Family had a good time with there family vacation.

To be continued...

Author's Note:

Sorry if you didn't like the story in the comments don't be too harsh to me I’m really sensitive but if you want me to edit it I can I wanted to finish it at night time.

Comments

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

8412387
I updated it only day two

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

8412388
Fixed

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

8412384
Sorry 😐

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

8412396
Argh!

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

8412396
I stayed up all night for nothing

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

8412396
I edited a bit of Arrived at Ponyville

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

8412805
Really everyone tells me to get an editor I’m sick of it and my friends and family says that I can become anything so I became a story writer I don't care if you like it or not I’m just sick of people saying get an editor! You got that?! 😡

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

8412388
It has been edited only took out Sparkle in Twilight’s name

[MidnightShy21]

8414089
People are just trying to help you okay? You don't have to act so mean...

[Walabio]

Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash sure are lucky to have a filly because fillies do not poop —— ¡poop is filthy, smelly, and disgusting!