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The-Black-Knight


Hey everyone, BK here! Just wanted to give a quick word of thank you for your interest x3 If you want to help support me, check out this link! https://www.patreon.com/AidenFlack

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OOH! I can't wait for more!!


also... maybe you should check the text? I'm seeing some odd spots in the text...

for example, this showed up a few times when i read the chapter

“Drax’narak, for eons you have served our Lord with unwavering loyalty. However, despite this, he has grown tired of your constant failures within our Lord’s plans to bathe the materium in its own blood.” Another Bloodthirster announced, Drax’narak looking around at those that have gathered to witness his punishment. “You understand why he has willed you to be here, correct?”

I enlarged it so it is more noticeable. that appears a few times in the text. should that be there? or is it supposed to have some symbol or something on it's place?

I have a feeling this guy is gonna be the butt of some Khorney jokes... 😂

Something tells me if a "invader" tries to hurt Dinky, he gets to know Drax’narak, and I'm pretty sure he won't fail with that.

LET THE STREETS OF EQUESTRIA RUN RED WITH CARIBOU BLOOD AND LET THEIR SKULLS BE COLLECTED FOR THE SKULL THRONE!!! BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!!!!!!

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Ummm... look again at what you posted, for I see no symbols...

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huh... maybe it's just me then...

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I do too. I see rectangles.

8406445 Wow, such enthusiasm.

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If there are random symbols, it isn't supposed to be there. For some odd reason, FiMFiction started to add them after you copy and pace. Replacing the ' " and Tab Space with them. I have to go back through and delete each one, then replace it with the proper symbol. Hence why my paragraphs haven't been tabbed lately.

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Drax’narak

The ''symbol'' is between this. I don't know if you see it, but its a ''TM''

Edit: There's actually three, its: â, a Euro symbol and the ''TM''

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It was supposed to be a ‘ there, like I said... FiMFiction replaces the actual symbol with that mess. Supposed to be “Drax’narak”

Done with the first chapter and I love it already. :pinkiecrazy:

Wait.. so Dinky became pen-pals with Khorne? What's next? Weekly tea time with the god Emperor?

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I dunno, I am crazy.
So, I might just be seeing things, XD
Or in this case, not seeing things.

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Maybe, for all we know that is where Celestia goes for her “Afternoon Tea Alone” xD She could be converse with the God Emperor, or even Tzeentch, about the mysteries of the universe. Possibly debating on different ways to rule.

I"m a HUGE warhammer fan, and I like this. Continue and I will consider giving you my follow, for now you have a fav and a thumb up

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WARNING SPOLIORS

:twilightoops: Shouldn't we be worried that an innocent child is making contact with the God of War, Blood, and Slaughter? I mean, how dose Khorne go about telling such innocence of his 'hobbies' without destroying it?

Or maybe she is already corrupted and the more obvious signs have yet to be shown, and she suddenly found the 'antics of his servants' amusing.:pinkiegasp:

either way, I'm interested.:pinkiecrazy:

P.S. Just a quick bit of criticism here, It would be nice if you could describe this first meeting between Dinky and Khorne, and more detail on her thoughts on his philosophies are.

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Well Khorne is punishing him what better way to punish a being to loves on fighting and slaughter then banishing him to a place where there is none

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Oh, I plan to, don’t worry. After all, that was just a quick intro for it. Don’t you think our Bloodthister friend will also be curious?

I'm now permanently paying attention for more chapters of this........just like many other stories I will not name.

I honestly wanna write a 40K crossover, but wheeew... that'd be a tough one.
Good start to this fic man, I'm honestly looking forward to more!

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Straight out of TTSD Magnus’ mouth x3 (I LOVE IT!)

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True, but I still don't like the idea of being killed just for being 'boring'.

Why khorn loves ponies?
....
....I have no mouth and I must scream.

Gosh darn those primaris marines. Ruining all of khorne cake's plans.

Hey, The-Black-Knight,

I was wondering if you would be okay with me adding this story to the Post-Fall / Crossovers folder of Schorl Tourmaline's Fall of Equestria fangroup.

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I am perfectly fine with it, my friend! Nothing wrong with sharing my work haha

Please Keep Going I Need More

Yes, please continue this story first when you got the time.

Been kinda quiet on this end...I'm actually curious to see where this goes o3o

dinky is pen pals with a blood god who seems not immune to her adorableness, i can accept this logic.

Yo, my man Black Knight. How's the next chapter goin?

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Streeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessful x.x Work has me bone tired, certification is about to go out on my BLET Cert, working on extending that, stuff at the house, trying to make more money, trying to work on my real novels to be published, military giving me the run around, and may be deploying. I’M TRYING PEOPLE! I REALLY AM!

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simply do your best and keep trying! so far your work is really good! can't wait for more!

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What branch?, an update would make a nice Christmas Gift.

That first chapter is really damn good!

Comment posted by Edguy0009 deleted Jan 25th, 2019
Comment posted by Edguy0009 deleted Jan 25th, 2019

“There!” She squeaked, smiling at the rune that had been burned into the grassy meadow, and nodded while pulling out a parchment. “Better let Khory know I’m done.” Dinky snickered, having accidently called her pen-pal that once, and he said it was a rather amusing nickname, not minding it in the least.

Pfft...snerk...HA HA HA HA!

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That'd be an interesting Fanfic to read.

8835557 Same.

Sir, you have my attention. I'm SO looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Okay this makes no sense what so ever and this completely disregards all of the warhammer lore, completely.

I love it and I wish it would be continued but I guess I'll just have to wait until someone else does

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