Having grown sick of Trixie's behavior, Starlight decides that she needs to be taught a lesson. After a talk with Maud, they come up with the perfect punishment to straighten Trixie out.
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King of Madness
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Bwahahaha! That is what magician horse gets for being a butt monkey! Bwahahahaha!
*Clears throat.*
Anyway, this was a good fan fiction. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Carry on with your day. XD
I wonder who would be worse to have a drill instructor Limestone or Spitfire?
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Yep. This was a long time coming for Trixie.
Glad you enjoyed it, sister.
8405747 I did indeed. :)
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Limestone by far. Spitfire is a plothole, but she won't break your bones and strangle you by your own tail.
Okay, yeah, this was hilarious.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Not bad not bad at all
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Thank you.
It would be fun if Limestone Pie whip The Mane 6 up in shape.
When I saw punishment, I thought of something entirely different... glad that's not the case here. I'll read it later.
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Go on?
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Thank you. It's what I do, man.
Wait... How do you keep seeing my fics? You don't even follow me.
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I see the recent updates mostly.
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Bruh...
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Oh, I see.
So, I'm officially the first person you've followed in your time on this site. I see that as an accomplishment!
CAKE FOR EVERYONE!
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Also, I love your avatar. Very cute.
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Thanks. It's by khuzangsketch on Tumblr. I asked permission to use it because I loved how they drew Fluttershy and Sunset in their Dance Magic costumes.
Kill Limestone.
is Starlight's problem leaving Trixie with that psychopath.
I want Limestone dead.
What the ever loving f
If Trixie ever deserved to get revenge on somepony, is Starlight, Maud, and especially Limestone.
Downvoted!!
Y'know what, this is a really random but funny excuse to see Limestone Pie dump endlessly on Trixie. I feel like I should feel bad for finding it as funny as I do, because it's a pretty unrelenting dumpfest, and reformed-Trixie surely deserves somewhat better.
But on the other hoof, I get to see hilarious Limestone shenanigans, so I'm good here.
I did notice some typos that I might PM about.
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Hmm... Well, if it makes you feel better, the next chapter of Saving the Siren is, like, a third done. Though you're probably tired of having to wait so long. I'm tired of that too.
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Well, honestly, after all the stuff Trixie has done after her redemption, which Starlight points out, I felt she deserved and needed to be taken down a few notches. Who better to do so than Drill Sergeant Limestone?
I appreciate it, but I'll probably just go over and edit it later later anyway.
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What made Starlight think leading that thing back to the changeling 'hive' was a good idea? When you are friends with someone, you take the good and the bad.
Starlight hasn't been an angel since her redemption either. Yet, I don't see her being forced to worked to the point she can't move the next day.
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I completely agree. But at least Starlight was called out and was trying help in the last episode. Trixie did nothing but be a b*tch and was never called out on it nor for helping Starlight. And I'm not biased; I hate them both.
Though I do want to do another fic where Starlight gets punished, but I haven't found the bases yet.
Anyway, you didn't enjoy this fic and that's fine.
Hahahahahaha, oh this was satisfying. Good job sir!
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Thanks, Billy. I enjoyed writing it.
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Here's the skinny: Limestone and Marble visits Ponyville to see how Pinkie and Maud are doing and decides head up to Twilight's castle and seeing an exhausted Spike doing all the work while the others lounging around, an extremely pissed Limestone decides to get the others in top rope shape and teaching them a painful lesson that will never forget: Everypony helps out not just one.
Well?
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I might just do that.
Hmm... That is actually a great idea!
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So, you hate both Trixie and Starlight? I say we just agree to disagree and move on with our lives.
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(shrugs) If that's what you want.
Very well done!
This didn't take long, I'm glad someone else had a problem with Trixie's behavior and sought to give her the punishment she deserves. At this point, I'm thinking it would actually take something like this to knock some sense into Trixie's thick head before she does something she can't undo.
8405744 Definitely Limestone. Spitfire wouldn't interrupt you while you're doing your business, or eating. Spitfire knows the difference between a strong push and pushing too hard too often. Limestone won't let up on you no matter what.
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Thank you.
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Totally agree with you. Trixie needs someone to kick her flank for her to learn anything.
8406099 That's something I have to wonder if the show gets. Saying sorry isn't enough when you do wrong, you need to understand what you're sorry for and why what you did was wrong. And you have to show that you've learned your lesson and won't make the same mistake again. Redemption isn't a straight path, but people shouldn't be questioning if a character has earned forgiveness when it seems like they've not learned their lesson.
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Amen.
8405908 Well, considering who've I had to read to/with, my mind wonders off to places I rather not go. In any case, I'll check it out later.
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Dude, I don't write stuff like that. Anyway, have you read the story yet?
8406205 Just finished it. it was better then what I've written recently. I noticed u had two random dislikes on your comment so I added a like
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Apparently,
twothree people don't like that I don't write clopfics or something.8407396 Depends. I'm not one to call the shots. Ugh, it's been sluggish for me lately, hence, the lace of updates...
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Wanna talk over PM?
8407404 Message sent
*snaps to attention* I think you went too tough on her, General Limestone Pie.
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Well, judging from your library, you still enjoyed the fic.
Also, I would've let Limestone answer, but for some reason, role-playing is outlawed on this site. I don't know why.
What did Trixie say about the Pie parents?
I'm guessing it's NSFC?
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NSFC? It that 'Not Safe For... Custard'?
As for what Trixie said, I'll leaving it ambiguaus. But I can assure you, if you knew, you would completely understand why Limestone was pissed.
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Not Safe For Children.
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Oh... Yeah, you could say that.
So, did you get a laugh outta this one?
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I was amused.
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Close enough.