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Eagle Heart


Just some guy who thinks he's cool, when clearly he's not.

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My name is Rohh Fireclaw, I am an Ash Karran monk from Azeroth, seeking peace in the world. Through my many trials in my life, I began showing people their true path. So they do not have to go through what I had to throughout my long life. I am said to be one of the most skilled on Azeroth, but I'm sure there are many who are better. Most likely a Pandaren. I may seem human at first, but truly...I am a Worgen. This is the story of a large chapter of my everlasting life. The story of how I found my new home, Equestria... and became its new protector.

This autobiography of sorts. has been written in the perspective of my past self. Otherwise known as first person. Enjoy.

On hiatus for an indefinite amount of time.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 37 )

First because I can and did, bitches. :rainbowdetermined2: Woo! :yay: :trollestia:
Good story. Keep it up.
~ZachTheBro~
:twilightblush: :twilightsheepish: :scootangel:

Seems interesting, but as as always I'm wary about the Tragedy tag.

Are you using the actual definition of the Tragedy tag, or something else?

921808 the actual definition, due to the first chapter and future events.

I hate it so much when the author make's a crossover and doesn't even point out WHAT is the crossover about... :facehoof:

CDR

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Azeroth is a world, and Worgen are a werewolf like species that lives there. World of Warcraft universe.

Why no fan fics staring more horde getting sent to Equis. And the worgons should have been with us we good Hordies

I even caught a rabbit for dinner...
Angel?:fluttercry:

Paper cut his neck so deep that he died, from blood loss?! Man, maybe I could understand arthery but neck? Catch arrow in hand, and throw hard enough to kill, don't mention about aim? Between eyes? Is he possesed by demon or titan? Arrows missed him hitting everywhere else, especially when he was standing in place? How these guys defended city if they can't hit standing man, with crossbows!
Plot have potential, but you've turned it into superhero story, IMO you need patient editor, maybe he could point you errors, and explain them all. Superheroes are boring, because they're untouchable and reader can't be supprised while reading such story.
When I'm reading this I have strong feeling that it was written on spot, that's bad. After writing story read it again, and again, look for errors, try to think like someone who never read this, it should help you with finding errors.
Throw this in pre readers group, maybe you'll find etitor there, they should give you piece of advice, it's not terrible, but could be much better, Don't waste that idea.

922399 Honestly i think your assuming too much from the first chapters, trying figure out the entire plot of the story before it's even gotten close to unfolding. People in real life have died from from paper cuts to the neck. Crossbows in Azeroth at that time were not very advanced and took a long time to reload.

This story has about 2 weeks worth of thought put into it so far, but your assuming way too much from chapters 1-4.

When can I expect more? I like this. I like this a lot. :pinkiecrazy:

If you want updates on the progress of my stories, check out my profile, i have a list of progress on all of my stories.

It's a good story, but it's going a bit fast and some things don't make scence. Like why is Rohh willing to talk to Derpy after being caught, but KO's Rainbow when she sees him?

935095 He KO'd rainbow because he didn't want to be seen. He talked to Derpy because he saw that the jig was up. Can't get much simpler than that.

937821 He's supposedly the most powerful monk In Azeroth, how did a cross eyed pony manage to catch him?

Awesome a worgen and pony crossover.
my 2 favorite things, well aside from explosions...

945012 She could fly? I'm not sure if that would be it.

945019 Wouldn't the trees and these ----> :derpyderp1: make it hard for her to fly in the everfree?

948027 it's very debateable amongst the fandom whether or not she can see fine with :derpyderp2:, as for the trees, it's really not that hard to fly over them and remember he stopped in a clearing.

948248 Then he's just stupid for stoping in a clearing.

951166 He ran for a while maybe he's tired? If you don't like it don't read it. K? :ajbemused:

951184 Who said I don't like it? I actually found the beginning rather enjoyable to read.

Looks GEWD. I shall read more. But make him get hurt. :flutterrage: HE IS NOT IMMORTAL FEWL!!! :ajbemused:

1163376 Immortality means you cannot die of old age. And yes, the 'protagonist' -is- immortal in that sense. :raritywink:

Awww. Was expecting him to be a monk pony from the northern peaks in the Crystal Wastes, on a pilgrimmage across Equestria to perform his sacred rite of passage of touching the giant black cube in the Badlands.

Well, I suppose I can keep dreaming for that kind of worldbuilding...

*Walks away, as a WoW story about the 'most powerful monk in Azeroth' screams Mary to him.*

Well... atleast he is a Human/Worgen, I thought he was going to be a stupid bloody Panda.
Now there's just the problem of him being a Monk instead of a Swifty Warrior.

Nice story. It's been awhile since I've read a good WoW fic. :pinkiehappy:

4276289 Maybe someday, but haven't had much motivation due to the overall crappy reception. :applejackunsure:

4277494 Workin' on it. But it may be a while.

4361382 Some day when I have motivation i'll continue it.

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