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PrincessColumbia

PrincessColumbia #1 · Sep 1st, 2017 · 2 · ·

You...ah, might want to change the name of your fic so it's not confused with the venerable (and somewhat legendary) Beating the Heat by Andrew Joshua Talon, first published back in 2012

Raccoon Writer

Raccoon Writer #2 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · ·

Well, I am thoroughly confused.

ThePegaKris

ThePegaKris #3 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · ·

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Thanks for the heads up! I honestly didn't know that the name was taken.

QuirkyGallade

QuirkyGallade #4 · Sep 1st, 2017 · 1 · ·

not bad. good work with this.

LILDASHIEGRINGO

LILDASHIEGRINGO #5 · Sep 1st, 2017 · 1 · ·

Woowee, you about to inspire me to make another Sunset fic! Way to go, yo!

OmniFox

OmniFox #6 · Sep 1st, 2017 · 2 · ·

SciSet keep doing it for months.

PrincessColumbia

PrincessColumbia #7 · Sep 1st, 2017 · 1 · ·

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No problem, thanks for being willing to accommodate...and NICE choice for the replacement name!

gundamexia34

gundamexia34 #8 · Sep 5th, 2017 · · ·

Not the best Lemon I've ever read, but definitely not the worst. You did a good job, keep it up!

Dragonrim

Dragonrim #9 · Sep 18th, 2017 · · 1 ·

aasopar jaratlam kyee! kyawanm jaratkaung hpwanhpyaoerayy nhaint s ngya s nyya myinkwinmyarr a kyarr pyaungglell lam ko hk hcyaya eat! saint rae hpawpyahkyet ngarko pyawshwin hcay ngarsai sainthoet ko kaunggsawaamhuko pyu maallhoet myahaaw laint partaal! sain rayhkyoehkaann aatwin nganpyaarrai ko m htarr kya bhuu sayhkyaar par hcay!

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