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Fedairkid


Anything is better than reality

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For the ponies of Equestria Celestia is a brilliant ruler. An individual shining as bright as the sun itself.
However, on the inside, she carries great tragedy, which surfaces whenever the princess is left alone with her thoughts and always brings a wave of depression with it.

One night, such a wave is interrupted by a filly Twilight knocking on the Princess' door. She had a nightmare.

The student will not be the only one finding comfort in the situation.

Note:

un-edited to see whether I actually improved as a writer on my own merit, for future stories I will look for an editor again.

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Comments ( 12 )

I enjoyed it! Wonderful!

8405436
Thank you very much! I still feel pretty anxious when posting a story, but kind words like yours help immensely :twilightsmile:

8405445
You're welcome! I was very anxious too when I made my first story, with time, you get over it.

I found the atmosphere and the mood you set to be just perfect. If they ever did a flashback, detailing Twilight's time with Celestia, I think there would be a scene like this.

8405617
Thank you very much :twilightsmile:

Really glad you enjoyed it, naming it good enough for the show is some really high praise!

8405646
Don't mention it. Besides, I'm also very anxious about whether or not people like my work.

8405657
Most people probably are. I mean we all always claim that we love constructive feedback, but while it is helpful, let's be honest, praise feels way nicer.. :twilightsheepish:

Really well written, sweet story. :twilightsmile: This is probably your best story so far. :pinkiesmile:

8405775
Thanks a lot :twilightsmile:

This is probably your best story so far

I do my best to improve, so receiving some confirmation on it feels pretty nice :pinkiehappy:

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