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EclipseSight


Just a guy who likes to write. I let my stories go where they please. I'm just their instrument of creation.

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Sunset Shimmer and Starlight Glimmer. Two ponies who are all too familiar with regret. Though they have just met, both can see a little of themselves in the other. After helping her friends stop the misguided rampage of Juniper Montage, Starlight is faced with another problem. Completely by accident, she uncovers Sunset's unrequited wish. To reunite with Princess Celestia.

With Sunset too enveloped in regret to undertake the journey alone, Starlight agrees to help. Pitted against their own doubts, will they be able to pull through or will Sunset's greatest wish go unanswered?

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 13 )

I've read this first chapter and this story looks really interesting I will be keeping an eye on this story as it gets further developed. :twilightsmile:

8387577 Hehe, thanks. Like I said, 1 or 2 days is about all I'll need so you hopefully shouldn't be waiting too long. Thanks for the comment. Good luck on your own story. I'm sorry you've been having issues with it but keep at it. Sometimes better ideas come in the face of adversity. Or, something like that... Anyway! Have a nice day!

8387583
Thank you, I look forward to reading your comments on it. Hope you have a nice day as well. :twilightsmile:

I love this.
Absolutely adorable, and the little touch with "Of course Celestia handled it" was perfect.

Thank you so much for writing: this is my favorite Celestia&Sunset reunion, or at least one of :)

8393373 Hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Even though writing it dragged me through Tartarus and back I had a lot of fun writing it. I liked that little moment too. It felt like something Celestia would do. Thanks for the comment. Have a nice day!

You portrayed the characters so well. The dynamics between Starlight and Sunset, I have no words. I Love this story. I love the reunion you gave Sunset and Celestia. It was so emotional, I have tears in my eyes. I bookmarked your story that how much I love it. I have never done that before.

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Thanks for the comment. That really means a lot. I put a lot of work into this and I'm glad people enjoyed it. Have a nice day!

So I like to write Sunset a lot, and I've got my own "redemption" story of hers, and everything in this story is what I was hoping to achieve with mine but simply could not. The way you wrote Sunset and Starlight, the way you had Celestia reunite, and even the small talk in the human world was so great.

This was really, really awesome.

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Heh, thanks for the praise. This was a really hard one to write. I was back and forth with it for ages. I'm glad people are liking it as much as they do. Thanks for the comment. Have a nice day.

Great story ^^ I'm glad that I found it :pinkiehappy:

but I was still scared, Scared that I would hurt him now

:trixieshiftleft:

Despite the other girls numerous mumbled protests

:trixieshiftright:

Oh man, this might be the Starlight and Sunset story I've been looking for ever since Mirror Magic. Hopefully the next two chapters can match this one.

My hopes have gotten higher.

once again she helpless against the raging torrent that followed.

You accidentally a word.

Yes. This is the Sunset and Starlight story I've been looking for. This was wonderful. There were a bunch of grammatical mistakes, but I don't care. This is what I've been looking for. The one that gives me hope there are more. The one I remember fondly after reading a couple junky ones even if it's your fault I took a chance on the junky ones.

“There's still a lot of the human world I've got to show you. If you're up for it that is.”

Yespls

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