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Lightwavers


Time burns.

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Comments ( 10 )

Wow. That was eye-candy. The good kind.

PLEASE, SEQUEL!! TOO GOOD!!! :pinkiehappy:

...Damn. That was really good, dude. Nice job.

“You have been boring. That is unacceptable.”

So true.

I have reviewed your story as part of the Reviewer Cafe!

As always, thank you for the time and effort you have put into the creation of your work. :twilightsmile:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/308771/reviews?page=6#comment/6197859

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Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the story. <3

Eh. It just feels... hacked together?

These worlds
Are broken
They need something
Something
New
Something
To help it out of the funk
Something
Chaotic
Or
Mayhaps
From the flip side of a mirror

These worlds need
A trickster
A mischeif maker
Someone
good
but
willing to fight and change fate
Foreground
Or
Background
Original
Or
Cannon
It matters not
They need
A trickster
A fellow capable of exploiting his foes Hamartia
And
Give the worlds
A second chance

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