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Dire_Straits


Hi, I'm a short story writer who caters to things that, more often than not, offends people!

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Everything had went well, for better or worse. Ember and Thorax managed to get along, much to Spike's relief. They even seemed to almost touch base on a personal level, but it was then that Spike felt his gut knot up. He felt a hint of possessiveness, a slight sliver of anger... Even Spike knew it was jealousy, but what he couldn't figure out is why? They were being friendly... too friendly? Spike takes on an adventure of self-discovery, one that'll leave Spike forever changed... for better or worse.

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Hmm... I'll see where this goes from here.

Love it. Keep it up!

"No, I won't let that happen, Spike," came the familiar voice of a mare, whom now seemed to shimmer into existence beside the mirror. It was Twilight Sparkle, whom had cloaked herself in an illusion incantation.

Spike's reflection in the mirror just eyed Spike with a knowing expression, "Yes, I knew she was here the whole time... she's the one who enchanted me, after all."

I didn't know Twilight was capable of such magic (the enchantment of the mirror). When I first read this, I thought it was Discord sneaking up on Spike.

Anyway, I really like where this is going, especially since as someone who ships both Spirax and Spember, I wasn't too keen on Thorax and Ember getting close in that episode. So my feelings kind of channel Spike's in this story. I remember thinking something along the lines of, "Please, no! Don't ship these two!"

I hope you continue on with this story soon, if at all. Not trying to rush you, but it has been a month.

You know, I really, really hate to do this to a story that I'm interested in. Especially when it has only one chapter. However, I do have my own rules to follow, and I'm afraid that you've left me with no choice.

By the power invested in me, myself and I, (since this story hasn't updated in over six months) I hereby declare this story to be dead. May it forever rest in peace.

P.S. Welcome to the Graveyard.

8794050
I'm sorry. D: My spirit for writing has been on a long hiatus! <3

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Here's to hoping to see a resurrection.

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