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Jackelope


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Well, that's something I never thought I'd see a story about.
Looks like it's going in my Read Later list.

Comment posted by MJP deleted Oct 27th, 2017
MJP
MJP #4 · Oct 27th, 2017 · · 18 ·

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who writes about incest?



without seeing a problem with it

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People who like taboos. Also people without siblings. That is if I had to guess. I apologise to you if you disliked it on that alone. I created this to fulfil the request of another fimfiction user, so the fetishes in this aren't necessarily my own. I try not to judge.

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That's not a very nice thing to say.

Comment posted by MJP deleted Oct 28th, 2017

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You seem angry. Would you like to talk about your anger?

I wish I was here sooner to witness this. :fluttershysad:

I CARRIED AN M16!

AND YOU!

YOU CARRY THAT

THAT

THAT

GUITAR!!!

I see you used a comission of mine for the cover-art :ajsmug:

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Oh, you commissioned it? Nice. I swear, I couldn't find a picture anywhere that I could crop out, show it was Luna dominating Celestia and that it was explicit all in one picture. It was a lucky find.

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Can't directly link because it's against the rules. But here's two halves that you can put together to see the bodywriting + climax version of the pic
https://derpib ooru.org/1475838

THERE IS NO RAPE.

You mean that in a 'there is no spoon' kind of way, right?

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Eh, sorta maybe... although whilst writing it I didn't mean to make it sound 'rapey'. Maybe the bit toward the end with Luna is a bit dubious but it's otherwise pretty non-forcy.

I started to read this, but had to stop because the grammar was distracting. You need another editing pass. That is not how you use 'unwittingly', and 'peak' is not 'peek'.

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This site is apparently peachy keen with stories involving the explicit rape, torture, and murder of child characters so long as they aren't 100% human shaped. Why would a story like this even twitch the meter?

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Yeah, I apologise for that. I stated my reasons in the author's box as to my declining writing quality with clop and my decision to not bother editing the piece if I thought it didn't reach acceptable writing standards. I'm sincerely sorry they're distracting. My actual writing experience isn't too long, I've been doing this seriously for about a year, so obviously I'm lacking in key areas. However, with clop fictions I've become burnt out on writing them, so instead of applying myself completely I can't help but gradually become less enthusiastic as I continue. I think it might have something to do with doing the ideas/requests of other people rather than my own so I'm less committed overall to producing something good and that I can be proud of even if I do want to make something good. Again, I'm sorry. Thank you for clicking on this fiction at all, I appreciate it was able to grab your eye at the very least.

Edit: Also, with the use of 'unwittingly' that was where I last ended writing this fiction several months ago and where I picked up again. Even now I don't recall what was going through my head when continuing it from that point, but I think I thought that the dreamer was the one who was being 'unwittingly' intruded upon by the genuine Luna herself. Sorry for that mistake.

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This. Far, far worse things have been written than some simple Princest. This is incredibly tame compared to them.

Reading this fic, I get the feeling that you might've been inspired by another comission of mine as well :p

https://derpibo oru.org/1154837

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I haven't actually seen that image before. Although, fun fact, I was initially going to write a scene where Celestia is put in stockade the court all came down to 'use' her, each one manifesting into a familiar figure. I didn't because It was becoming too bloated and I'm not at all adept at sex-scene transitions. :twilightblush:

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The story is pretty good so far. Might throw some requests your way myself :p

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Thanks :twilightsmile:
I'd suggest my other words in truth, however. No Longer Customary is my personal favourite, at least concerning my own works.

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More of a fan of NSFW goodness these days. With Gleaming Shield or Princest

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It, too, is a clopfic. Also involving a futa Luna. Most of my works are in fact that, but I don't suggest looking at anything earlier than 'unexpected client' to be honest. Although if you want princest, 'A weird night' has that, although like the title suggests, it's 'weird'. It was my first request and delved into a lot of things I didn't like myself personally.

I love it. Would love to see a sequel or something. Also, can you direct me to the original picture you used for this story?

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It's in the comments, lad. Just scroll down.
I'm happy you enjoyed the story. :twilightsmile: I had not planned a sequel, although I have a menagerie of other clopfics you might like that are going to have sequels in the works.

As soon as I saw the title I started singing "We're not gonna take it" xD

awesome clop fic

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:twilightsmile: Thank you kindly.

I didn't really like Celestia taking back control in the dream and domming Luna along with the dream Luna, cause the way she was written struck me more as her being a sub, than a switch. Definitly with the kind of submissive kinks she had. But apart from that, pretty good fic

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The person who requested the fiction wanted the scene in, so I couldn't really do much about that. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, thank you. :twilightsmile:

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your very very welcome

Can't lie that was hot.

nice story

Nice though I was hoping on perhaps a little more teasing and spanking.

Comment posted by Wildfiretiremile deleted Feb 18th, 2020

Hm, maybe you got the errors with a later editing run, but I'm a stickler for such things and I didn't notice any egregious grammar mistakes. If they were there, it wasn't enough to lose me.

While I'm not a futa fan, the princest bug has bitten me hard over the last few weeks and this was a fine read. A really good balance of non-con(ish) taboo sexiness without fundamentally breaking the characters, with a nifty twist at the end. :)

I'm ashamed to say I know exactly where that cover art is from

I kept reading until submissive celestia became dominant

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